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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
lets make this quick... Im bringin tears to this kid, you dont have the clearance to spit You get no hope, cuz even if i no-showed, my spirit would win ^^DOES THIS RHYME? I'll crucify you and your words, since you let our verbs cross It's like i work at Olive Garden the way i left this herb tossed ^NICE META..HAHA You raw kid... ? Stop it!.... im ahead of you, like egyptians with watches When 'push comes to shove' your punches miss more than 'lethargic moshpits' ^AGAIN NICE WORDPLAY N META switch it Im 'Focus'ed like 'Ford's .. I'll batter and abuse this cat This dude is wack, Even biters wouldnt re-use his raps ^^KINDA PLAYED...BUT DECENT Treadmills aint keepin ya 'waist in fit' two of us and u place in fifth Your jus a waste of spit.. replace ya lips with ya ass, cuz you tastin shit ^^THIS WAS PRETTY FUNNY Death Vision claims he's sick ? thats the right word but the wrong idea Your skills come up too short.. like average height in North Korea ^^HA,,LIKE THIS BAR..VERY ORIGINAL Punchline's have ya crew hoppin and prancing in hot sand Because my verses make LC look like a retarded pop band ^^^NOT REALLY FEELIN THIS I wanted to get personal on this dude, but i'll still win by far Puttin a noob against a vet, no one even knows who u are ^^THIS WAS AIIGHT I GUESS Done- DEATH VISION the existance of ya whole crew is useless ya'll irrelevant tha flow is heaven sent some say it's even intelligent ^^HMM THIS AINT REALLY A PUNCH tha rhymes is crazy call it flung fury yall some bitches aiyo fuck this hung jury i'll leave all of 'em in stitches ^^AGAIN...THIS AINT REALLY HITTIN little snitches; stay in tha place of a child fuckin adolesence sayin prayers hopin we dont murda u nigga count ya blessings ^^NO THIS IS A STATEMENT..NO PUNCH half ya crew sounds white they bite.....fuckin net dorks i'm sayin this shit 4 tha south nigga......FUCK NEW YORK! ^^ANOTHER STATEMENT NO PUNCH fuck tha jury fuck tha judge nigga fuck tha district matta fact if u don't feel me fuck whoeva's listenin ^^NO convert these niggaz at birth like they christians like J Gutta u only wanna battle cuz u feelin Cataclysm ^^BIT BETA come off ya high horse mothafucka u truly aint a vet think u harcore nigga u aint even got ya lil nuts wet ^^^I QUITE LIKE THIS..QUITE FUNNY u niggas u tha best i'll win no contest dis a gut check this is a easy victory like a brawl between red n ruffnecks ^^TOO BASIC I spit flame u cant contain my punches and metas u sweet like 16 nigga my flows turn ya body vanilla ^DNT RHYME creating names under false pretences u far from smart u ignorrant, inarticulate ya brains is fillin for pop tarts ^^HMMMM..NOT FEELIN IT i'm a mastermind wit a disaster mind suicidal at best * leaves tha crowd 2 throw drinks on u like Ron Artest* ^^OK...BETA OVERALL FLOW...U HAD PUNCHES IN EVERY BAR, SOME GOOD, COUPLE NOT SO..BUT U DID ENOUGH..U HAD SUM CREATIVE METAS WHICH MADE ME LAUGH. DEATH .U PROB HAD 1 GUD BAR, MOST OF YA SHIT WAS TOO BASIC, NO REAL METAS OR WORDPLAY,TRY UPPIN YA PUNCHES INSTEAD OF MAKING SIMPLE STATEMENTS. |
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
flow...nice drop yo...ure structure was a little fucked in places...some stretched bars...vocab was gud...sum nice punches, hittin hard...couple of lines that had me laughin hard...pretty creative in places but basic in others...one or two played concepts that didn't really need to be there...overall i think u can do better...i've seen u do better but i don't need to tell you to elevate...7.5/10 deathvision...alright drop...i never seen u before but i was impressed...u had some nice wordplay in there...couple of nice multies...personals were there although not as hard-hittin as flow...not much for creativity u shud try and work on that cuz creative spits are more enjoyable...ure structure was on point with nuthin too stretched...flow was gud but just work on ure punches and u'll go far...overall 6/10 check it yo.............. return the fave on one of my battles...links are in my siggy!!! |
Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
Im bringin tears to this kid, you dont have the clearance to spit You get no hope, cuz even if i no-showed, my spirit would win nah I'll crucify you and your words, since you let our verbs cross It's like i work at Olive Garden the way i left this herb tossed pretty decent You raw kid... ? Stop it!.... im ahead of you, like egyptians with watches When 'push comes to shove' your punches miss more than 'lethargic moshpits' flow was too long, punch was aight Im 'Focus'ed like 'Ford's .. I'll batter and abuse this cat This dude is wack, Even biters wouldnt re-use his raps good Treadmills aint keepin ya 'waist in fit' two of us and u place in fifth Your jus a waste of spit.. replace ya lips with ya ass, cuz you tastin shit kinda decent, but weak though Death Vision claims he's sick ? thats the right word but the wrong idea Your skills come up too short.. like average height in North Korea nah not feelin this 1 Punchline's have ya crew hoppin and prancing in hot sand Because my verses make LC look like a retarded pop band pretty decent here I wanted to get personal on this dude, but i'll still win by far Puttin a noob against a vet, no one even knows who u are seen this 1 somewhere b4…was okay though the existance of ya whole crew is useless ya'll irrelevant tha flow is heaven sent some say it's even intelligent good tha rhymes is crazy call it flung fury yall some bitches aiyo fuck this hung jury i'll leave all of 'em in stitches nope, weak here little snitches; stay in tha place of a child fuckin adolesence sayin prayers hopin we dont murda u nigga count ya blessings nah, wack here half ya crew sounds white they bite.....fuckin net dorks i'm sayin this shit 4 tha south nigga......FUCK NEW YORK! …what does south & ny got to do wit this? WACK fuck tha jury fuck tha judge nigga fuck tha district matta fact if u don't feel me fuck whoeva's listenin not feelin this 1 convert these niggaz at birth like they christians like J Gutta u only wanna battle cuz u feelin Cataclysm decent come off ya high horse mothafucka u truly aint a vet think u harcore nigga u aint even got ya lil nuts wet weak here u niggas u tha best i'll win no contest dis a gut check this is a easy victory like a brawl between red n ruffnecks kinda decent I spit flame u cant contain my punches and metas u sweet like 16 nigga my flows turn ya body vanilla hell 2 the no creating names under false pretences u far from smart u ignorrant, inarticulate ya brains is fillin for pop tarts no mayn i'm a mastermind wit a disaster mind suicidal at best * leaves tha crowd 2 throw drinks on u like Ron Artest* okay decent overall Era took this one, just came harder in the punches flow was good & the vocab was aight, serial killer, elevate some more, those punches you used were weak all the way through your whole verse, no hate…just elevate [size=4]RTF Era http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=184213 |
Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
Flow got dis basically cause he had betta punches both had good verse but Flow came harder he stayed on flow the whole time Death didnt come harder and his punches werent as good as usual |
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
Wow alright not even a close battle really, my vote goes to flow,... Vision come with a nice opener,.. the existance of ya whole crew is useless ya'll irrelevant tha flow is heaven sent some say it's even intelligent ^*Nice flow, nice personal but I feel that the whole verse was basic didn't really feel it. It the whole verse flowd ok but uping for more complex rhyming,.. Punches didn't really have any,.. the open flowed alright but it wasn't a punch. Complexity was lacking in every department u need to elevate. Flow,... Dont need to say much really, nice flow with inners. Punches hitt hard,... Death Vision claims he's sick ? thats the right word but the wrong idea Your skills come up too short.. like average height in North Korea ^*This punch killed it and one the battle on it's own*^ |
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