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i liked this one very creative.....good hook i liked the emotion and imagery you gave the hook very good.....for all the verses together it was very good stucture and flowed and good vocabulary and creativty with metaphores and just dope...good imagery it was all pretty good..i was feeling the emotion alot and the vocab brought it out alot better...this was a hella good peice...keep it up
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That Was Hott Fams...
I Was Really Feeling The Concept And The Emotion... This Was A Real Original Topic Aswell... Not Something Seen Very Often... Uuuum, The Hook Was Hot As Fuck... Could Def See That Sounded Good On Audio... The Vocabulary Was On Point... Verse Structure And Drop Structure Were Flawless... Now The Negatives... Only Thing I Really Have To Complain About It Some Rhyming... Some Of The Flow In The Beging Was Off... It Didnt Rhyme At All At Times And Other Times It Was Forced... Other Than That Everything Was On Point Fams... Real Nice Piece... Stay Up Fams And Sorry It Took So Long Check This... .One. |
thanx..........................................
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uppin.......bringing back my old shit
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