Voted For: Os1ris

Voted for Os1ris

Many may now n many may not I look for Flow n Punches when I vote

Os1ris had the better punches n semi better flow i like how he tied it all into a nice verse the flow was good n his punches were harder

Mage i liked how u spelled his name backwards wit lyrics etc.. but that was good rhyme work but not hard on the punches
ya flow was good no doubt but wit large vocab n sum lines i had to restart n try to get back in rhythm

so the vote goes to Os1ris

Not hatin us votin

yo uppin this shit so yall i don't wanna be rude but hurry up wit the votes

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lets gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Voted For: Blackmage

ur shit is hot u keed doing the damn thing.........

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^^^^^^^delete that vote and UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP PPPPPPPiinnnnn

yo go get that last vote deleted homie. we need to keep this fair just like i got your votes deleted you should get mine erased maybe one of these days someone can get this shit right

I'm uppin this and by the way os1ris, to make it fair we could just get the votes on this battle reset and start from scratch so what's up. Hit me back p.m. post it don't matter

I mean the 1-1 thing is cool really dont matter just want some people to vote fairly on this shit lets go yall

bumpinthis thoing ahghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

This was feedback posted for Os1ris
 

nice drop o u got sum good wordplay & decent punches in this battle

Voted For: Blackmage

i think blackmage won because he had good vocab
really hard hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
os1ris u had good structure
u need a lil work on ur vocab
u had a pretty good opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were pretty good

favorite blackmage lines:
you say you from the squared circle but what ring's in question
just so you know you and ya lyrics are as fake as pro wrestling
i gotta give it to you, you got the heart to score
cause this guy is 1-4 and he still wants more
you soft core sophmore my verse is a neck amputant
where ya head at, you'll win when the nets win a championship
out my mouth is "sick shit" so i cough and flush
i'll toss u up cause you ain't just soft u plush

favorite os1ris lines:
You could be an airpilot and still never be flyweight/
Your nothin but dollars thrills not even worth the net space//
Id say you had a good verse but id be straight lyin to you/
I'll step on mage's soul like I put my feet in your shoes//
Os1ris is sick and mage is nothin but lame talk/
I beat and run over any black like playground asphalt//

Up this yall we need some votes to end this get at us

Voted For: Blackmage

siris...
you came cool on this. you had some creative concepts......and nice structure (but drop the //'s at the end of your lines). your flow wasnt bad either. next time, try to add some personals. also, try to fine tune your punches a little better. they were cool, but they could've been sharper. when you get a 10 bar line limit (20 lines)...either you use up as much of your limited lines as you can, or you really shut them down in a few. you didnt do either brutha. next time, use the lines to your advantage.....and rip 'em apart (whoever it may be). please dont take any of my remarks as haterish homie, i just want to help.......word. keep up the good work. i'll keep an eye out for your future pieces.

mage...
you came pretty original. i liked your flow..........and your structure was nice (except that first line....owww! lol.) you had some pretty nice ideas that you ran with in here. right on. some of that shit was pretty funny......however, you need to fine tune your punches as well homie. your vocab was fairly decent, good job. you had some basic multies...but they worked. next time, be careful with the self glorification. alot of people dont like voting on that kind of shit (i liked it though).

good job fellas...........continue to hold it down.
(p.s.- osiris, good luck with the new crew.)

oner...


...the super.....c.s.