This was feedback posted for Personify
 

good luck to both. merk em personify..................

Voted For: •Para¶el•

•Para¶el•:your storyline was pretty good here,
and you practically stayed on topic on this piece here
Vocab was nice, hardly any mistakes, had a good balance
between the complex and basic shit here. The emotion
on ur drop was there, could've used a little more imagery,
but it was all good here. Your structure was in place and
not stretched everywhere and your flow was good too.
But overall you had a good drop...

Personify: Your structure was aight in ur drop,
the flow was pretty good, and the vocab was good here
too. Nice storyline by you, but overall you had a good drop
also, nutting much though

Overall: Kind of a close battle here, but •Para¶el• took
this one though, just had a better drop to it...

No Hate To You Though Personify

Least this is getting voted on. If I lose I request a rematch Para :)

lol........fine with me....but yo personfy um mentally rhymes with disabilty look...and then i used emotion..but why are we complaining elts be kool about it ight...

Voted For: •Para¶el•

seriously u get this easyli i got to say,
Parallel:Your vocab was dope,reminds me of eminem,i really was feeling this piece,everytime i vote i copie and past the best line but now i should copie and past the verse lmao very good,the structure was perfect,this flowed(idk if we can say that lol)

Personify: reading your verse after reading parallel's verse is like,i want to read parallel's verse again,no hate but true,good structure,vocab was cool,nice flowing(once again lol) overall cool battle but i have to say Parallel

Vote:Parallel

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Man I figured people would vote on this. Uppin....

Voted For: •Para¶el•

Þaяallεl - Good spit man, you followed the topic well, flowed very well... and had some creative thinkin' in there.. with good emotion. 8.5/10

Golden.Days - Yours flowed very good, didnt rhyme is some places, but showed a good picture in my head and followed topic well. 8/10

Vote - Þaяallεl

4-0 about to KO this kat...lets geet 1 more voe.....uppin

Voted For: Personify

great battle...props to both

flow-golden.days, parallels verse the first lines of each bar were good but then the second lines on a lot of them were too short...they didnt flow right, structure doesnt matter to me so theres really no point in keeping it all together, all you need is a good syllable count which golden.days had...

imagery-none, didnt sense enough imagery from both...both had a significant amount of emotion though, but imagery was just lacking from both in my opinion

emotion-golden.days, parallels just didnt feel as emotional...golden.days verse you had to think more to get the whole picture which is great...he used certain words and put them in certain places so that you knew what was happening but at the same time you had to go a little deeper...and thats what held me into his verse

beginning/end-golden.days, the layout he used was great and this is what took the win...the beginning was a good intro it didnt jump right into the verse and the ending had a nice line

overall i think golden.days had a better verse but both brought some good shit...no hate good luck to both

peace

Sorry man, no KO. Uppin...........................

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Voted For: Personify

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