your verse was dope... nice punches... little bit off strucutre but its cool..

other verse was nice also.. sick flow.. this shit shouldnt be slept on...

I couldnt make up my mind, so this is just feedback and uppin.

uppin man...I really liked that last line...that was ill I think this got skillz yo

c'mon uppin!! :laugh:

damn im getting tired of upping this slept thread....

uppity up...................................

uppin this threadf

uppin...yo this thread is gettin slept on...uppin!! :laugh:

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yo uppin for reall....who caught dat last punchline about uppin??
dat was dope...uppin!!

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why's this thread at the bottom...uppin!!

uppin...damn i tried my best..and still this shit is getting slept....
damn i had like 2 nice punches and like 4 killer metaphores....

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This is pure dopeness someone should sticky this shit^^^^^^ uppppppppppppppppppppppiinnngaaa
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