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....Gone.... 01-25-05 10:12 PM

The only thing you was wack in was flow. Multi'z you had them, but you need flow and structure to master multi'z. Sorry fam, in what category did you beat damian in?

flow
punches
multi'z
personals

^^ in what category?

Speats 01-26-05 07:33 AM

i cant belive how bad you are,YOUR the fucking retarded one,you such a fuckin prick i cant even belive you,it was so dumb was u just said that i quoted it in my sig so the others could see how looser you are

Re~Verb 01-26-05 07:44 AM

Voted For: Damian

damian wins.....
phive..no structue, struc ya verse like damians.you had no punches at all,no metas..although u did have plenty of multies,u need to make creative punches usin metas n try makin em personal..

damian..u attempted some wordplay, but it din quite come off,your punches need to be harder n personal..keep elevatin.
u did have enough to beat this guy however

GKillaz05 01-26-05 08:24 AM

Voted For: Damian

Damian - Iight spit man, have seen better.. but flow was good and decent punches.

Best Line - Dumb enough to call me out while im already battlin him
My violente relation with you will be kinda Eminem to Kim

Worst Line - Ill cut your Phive fingers from your hand and stick it
So like that atleas youll have something long to play with

phive - Iight spit, your rap was iight, but no real punches in there.

Best Line - im an ill lyracist with mad powers, im knockin niggas down like the twin towers, im drillin you in da ground like a meteor shower// you fucked son cuz you aint passin go, your rhymes are slow, im pullin ya down like an under toe, im the champ son and i just added another KO//

Worst Line - yo this fool is from quebec, eatin flies like a frog, ill be leavin ya brain lost in da fog, //
i have unnatainable style thatll leave ya brain restless, ill squeeze at ya lungs leavin ya breathless, phive aint one to be fucked with//

OVERALL - close battle here, both were pretty weak but I vote for Damian. He had the better flow and throw better punches. 5, you need to throw punches and flow better.

Vote - Damian

Fearless Prophet 01-26-05 11:27 AM

Voted For: phive

I give this shit to PHIVE cuz hes got the grimey pop u in the face with my knob style

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Javelin 01-26-05 02:10 PM

This was feedback posted for Damian
 
nice drop Damien, work a tad bit on the vocab but great flow. And Phive, wtf is is with the racism man, do you have to call him a frog just cause he'S from quebec. English's probably his 2nd languauge and he still whooped your ass.

Javelin

phive 01-26-05 03:27 PM

yo uppin fo some votes .................................................. .....

Speats 01-26-05 05:25 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Fearless Prophet
Voted For: phive

I give this shit to PHIVE cuz hes got the grimey pop u in the face with my knob style


what the hell? thats bot a real vote

Dex 01-26-05 05:28 PM

This was feedback posted for Damian
 
your verse was real good damian.

Uoi elevated so much since you first came

Armada Da 187 01-26-05 05:48 PM

Voted For: phive

Voted for Phive

Phive had dis in my mind.

TG gonna be screamin hate vote i know it but ive voted agaisnt Phive in other battles so this is no hate votin this is strictly lookin at both n pickin which one I thought was best n thas Phive

Phive had way harder disses n a way better flow
Multies were at random i liked that
Personals didnt see much but from what I saw Phive had that

Damian disses was ight pretty strong but a little humerous

Ill cut your Phive fingers from your hand and stick it
So like that atleas youll have something long to play with

Made me laugh yo, diss n make it hurt man not a joke

vote goes to Phive

NOT HATIN, Jus VOTIN

Parallel 01-26-05 06:08 PM

Voted For: Damian

phive
well ok first of all your stucture was pretty weak and it made me go damn i dont understand a word...and the flow lacked as well....you had no decent punches or anything creative to your verse i jsut felt you had nothin at all to win this....use more vocab and metaphores...give you tight punches..but you lacked punches...no hate

Damian
alright i liked your verse alot more....good stucture decent punches.....i just liked the way you worded it better...btter vocab just had a better wittiness to it.....good battle for you, you will win this easy i think...

opener: D
closer: D
punches: D
creativty: D
metas: D
stucture: D
flow: D
...win: Damian

phive 01-26-05 09:18 PM

yo uppin fo some real votes come on people yall know i schooled this fag come on playas

Speats 01-27-05 07:43 AM

why not shutin the fuck up stupid bastard
now uppin for some more votes
seriously Phive,your one of the dumbess bitchs on RV

Armada Da 187 01-27-05 08:44 AM

everyone jus breath....... lol I can understand why Phive so Mad i mean i saw damians verse it was ight but nothing worth 4 votes to his one i mean rhyme skills definitly r in that verse Im not understandin how he is gettin these votes sayin he came harder n shyt

Speats 01-27-05 04:48 PM

iight Phive pm Armada to tell him to stop taking your side,his finish with your vote so


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