This was feedback posted for phive
 

Yo Man Tghis Is A-gam Eu Said My Shit Was Writtin By Someone Els I Swear It Wasent And If It Was From Who ??

lol uppin on this shit, fuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk voooote already netceessss

uppin playasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssss

another uppin, this site sucks god damn battles last for days around here and this is one of the biggest sites on the net, do people come here to socialise??

holy fuck this shit still aint got any votes, and im gonna have to still come here and up this shit mother fuck all of you

Voted For: Spite

k well you dropped harder, no real personels, but it was decent, some punches hit... but your not a vet...try to make your multi's more then 1 sylable, but otherwise nice... good flow, phive, look at some of this sites best, and try to learn off of them k, you'll both learn how to elevate, but I gotta give this ine to spite

hmmmm uppin come on ppl lets get this going oh so it has to be atleast 50 characters wrong well shit

Voted For: Spite

phive: fix ya structure mayne... and try not to use so many self-glorification lines... you had some aight lines in your verse overall.. however Spite came harder with his lines, a better structure, both ya flow was pretty good.. but i wasn't feeling Spite's closer yours beat his barely... the best lines in this battle were:
rather bringing you close but what bother's me the most,
is how i ended your rap carreer with a POST!
^^those lines right there, was enuff to take the battle.. kinda funny but a nice punch, the only one that stood out even tho the lines are in separate bars, i think the way you worded them were nice..

Spite gets my vote on this one..

lol aight aight 2 weeks later, this battle is ALMOST done so yah uppin

Voted For: phive

winner- phive

check it.
I'll give you this loss cuz its not like im taking you of course,
rather bringing you close but what bother's me the most,
is how i ended your rap carreer with a POST!
Now your ghost, i'll toast as i watch this guy choke,
and i dont even need to pull a PHIVE JOKE
Arrive smoked on rap verse im a savage to step
cuz ur so wack, this win will damage my rep
Barrage a vet ur heat is a flare to the best,
i'll cum in ur lungs n watch the baby TEAR THROUGH UR CHEST
Dare you to test but i'll beat you anyday,
so take this loss in a friendly way
cuz hey its the INTERNET ANYWAYZ!

aight, u had decent punches(they need improvement though), your vocab needs to improve, u had some nice inner rhyming.



im makin this fool happy cuz imma battle him, soon ya smile will wipe to a grim, call me fat boy slim, cuz imma funk show brotha about ta win,//
yo you cant be here to watch me ruin ya shit so ill write, my rapstyles tight, i say good night, cuz i laid ya out no de(spite)// yo kid you only wanted phive bars fo me ta spit, well imma give you full potential in this shit, imma leave ya hit, on the ground with a slit wrist//
you cant pick up cuz yur a fag, cant fight ya way out of a wet paper bag, im droppin niggas like im playin tag, break ya leg, so dont brag, cuz ya rap style i made// time fo a closer on this fool, ya uncool, im werkin you like a tool, im drownin you like a three year old in a pool//

nice inner rhyming, punches were pretty good but need improvement, had a little bit of wordplay, not too bad overall



you two are pretty evenly matched, so nice battle

mmmm victory, i can almost see it, but will phive come back, nope not likely

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhh

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ daasa

lol this battle started last month, and people still havent finished voting on this lol must be a record or something

Voted For: Spite

Spite got this

Not the strongest battl;e

But spite has the much better structure, an a few punches that hit kinda hard, oth lacked consistancy, an phive the structure of your verse was all over the place, no real flow too it, so spite for the hard hittin lines in what has ta be said wasnt the strongest battle, but spite hands down won this battle

No hate ta neither, an return the fave in any of my battles you see floatin around

Peace