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Voted For: MC IgGY
winner - MC IGGY Wanna buck up? hahahahaha.. Try it and one day you bastards lay, this faggots comin at me 'weak' as fuck, like sunday to saturday,* good wordplay So how you gonna beat me, you can't so just hold me back bitch, Or you'll get wrapped up in plastic, like a bologno sandwich, decent punch, not too strong This is like my fourth or fifth post, bitch im sure your scared, Me not sick is like seein M. Jackson, and sayin theres no perverts there nice line On the bottle it said take two, but instead I took fifty, Thats why I don't need no vibrater to have you 'shook quickly', pretty strong punch, Look Iggy, you can hate me, but if you ever try to touch my shit, I'll stomp ya face flat with timbs and start yellin "suck my dick!" weak punch Then i'll fuckin eat it for breakfast and pretend its a pancake, You can't rap for shit, and im not syain that cuz you match a bandaid..** ok finisher mc iggy's verse My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE nice punch, I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN hot punch, nice multis You'll never see the SIGN, all you see are lyrics that RHYME me ripping your brain is the only way, u be expanding your MIND nice wordplay, decent punch Dawg, ur still on the ground, i'm in the ABYSS I'm hitting your balls from side to side like we playing TENNIS funny punch what kind of name is Onestepbeyond u'll be one step beyond life cuz 6 feet underground is where u'll be found. could of had a stronger finisher but this one was ok flow-tie multi- MC punches-MC wordplay-ONESTEP opener-ONESTEP finisher-MC |
uppin for votes...................................
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uppin for votes..... keep em' comin people.........
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comon peepz, if u vote for me, ill vote for u, fair votes only plz
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond
Mc IGGY- Alright man, you've elevated much. You got some good punches in there, flow was kinda fucked up......Dont put CAPS at the end of your sentence.....structure needs help.....Had some good wordplays. OneStepBeyond- All right nice flow, with some good punches and wordplay was good. Dont stretch your lines that much. Much elevation on punches....Add multi'z...... overall=This battle was close, due to the elevation from both heads.....Mc Iggy nice verse with some good punches, flow was chopped up though, elevate on structure....Wordplay's was good, keep doing it...add some multi'z too.....onestepbeyond...nice verse fam with some good punches..but need elevation.....In my eyes...i think Onestepbeyond..got this...basically he had better effective punches with good flow....Mc iggy nice you've have elevated...but the punches werent hard enough....vote onestepbeyond for some harder punches and with good flow..wun |
i shoulda won already................. uppin bitches
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i swear if one more of my votes gets dqed ima kill somebody
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Voted For: MC IgGY
im gonna vote for you because I thought you were better, word Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
checkin battle out....onestepbeyond......WELCOME to NOK if u want in.......good shit...
good drop iggy |
Voted For: MC IgGY
had good flow wid good punches and good multies had good structure needs some work on vocab but overall i liked it more than onestepbeyond's flow onestepbeyond had good flow and structure but needs to work on his vocab and multis best mc iggy lines: My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN |
uppin for more votes,
ill return the favor if u vote honest votes only plz |
comon peeps, uppin for more votes
ill return da favor |
This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
Wanna buck up? hahahahaha.. Try it and one day you bastards lay,
this faggots comin at me 'weak' as fuck, like sunday to saturday,* ********************************************* ok the PUNCH was corny and older than GOD'S DAD your multie needed improvement cuz it didn't exsist OVER ALL STANDING ....NO ON THIS BAR ********************************************* So how you gonna beat me, you can't so just hold me back bitch, Or you'll get wrapped up in plastic, like a bologno sandwich, ********************************************* C'MON......THERE WAS NO PUNCH,PERSONAL, BUT AT LEAST YA FLOW WAS GOOD OVER ALL.....NO 4 THIS BAR ********************************************* This is like my fourth or fifth post, bitch im sure your scared, Me not sick is like seein M. Jackson, and sayin theres no perverts there, ********************************************* HAHAHAHA....NO!.....THAT WAS WEAK AS FUCK TOO,,,MJ BARS ARE OLD TOO OVER ALL .....NO 4 THIS BAR ********************************************* On the bottle it said take two, but instead I took fifty, Thats why I don't need no vibrater to have you 'shook quickly', ********************************************* DO I REALLY HAVE TO EVEN CONSITER STATE'N WHY THIS 1 SUCKS?! ********************************************* Look Iggy, you can hate me, but if you ever try to touch my shit, I'll stomp ya face flat with timbs and start yellin "suck my dick!" ********************************************* ALMOST A CANIBUS QUOTE,....I THINK YOU NEED TO WORK ON YA SHYT MORE CUZ THIS AINT SHYT BUT TALKIN SHYT....NOOOOOOOO ********************************************* Then i'll fuckin eat it for breakfast and pretend its a pancake, You can't rap for shit, and im not syain that cuz you match a bandaid..** ********************************************* UM...NO 4 THIS BAR ********************************************* 1-10 YOU GET A ,..........2........... FROM ME |
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My words lethal like aids, to them u won't find a CURE My punches hit u harder than 50 to Jada in "THE MASSACRE ********************************************* THANX 4 THA WARNING...NOW THROW SOME PUNCHES ********************************************* I'll strip~your~skin, pick~up the~win, while commiting only one SIN take ur prewritten verse but to where you found it, in the recycling BIN ********************************************* THE BEST PUNCH,MULTIE'S I'VE SEEN IN THIS BATTLE OVER ALL........ YES..... ********************************************* You'll never see the SIGN, all you see are lyrics that RHYME me ripping your brain is the only way, u be expanding your MIND ********************************************* KEEP IT MOVE'N...YOU DO'N GOOD ********************************************* Dawg, ur still on the ground, i'm in the ABYSS I'm hitting your balls from side to side like we playing TENNIS ********************************************* ___YOU PLAY'ED THE KILLER IN SCARY MOVIE HUH?!___ THIS WAS OK BUT YOU NEED TO GET MORE PERSONAL AND MORE CREATIVE ********************************************* what kind of name is Onestepbeyond u'll be one step beyond life cuz 6 feet underground is where u'll be found. ********************************************* AT LEAST ITS BETTER THAN HIS VERSE ********************************************* |
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Multies:...........MC Metaphores:........NONE PUNCHES:..........MC PERSONALS:...........NONE FLOW:............TIE VOCAB:..........TIE COMPLEXITY:..........MC FOLLOW THROUGH:..........MC OVER ALL VOTE......ME IQGY WINS THIS |
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