Man,da reason why I dont talk bout topics is cause Im in my prime
Im only 13 and still killin most rappers on here,so I just have fun spttin,I dont give a fuck bout speakin da truth,I keep shit krunk
But speakin da truth is more mature than just spittin sumthin,but Im a pre-teen.Ima start speakin da truth when Im in my late 20's.I rap at school,I dont even listen to da teacher,I just write shit,and when I get home,sometimes I post it ta see what yall think of it.Dats all

yeh, and we tell you what we think, but you get mad at our "opinions"

why wait till your 20 to speak the truth? why not start now,then by the time you 20 you will be so truthfull you might actually be dope.
Oh yeh, listen to the teacher. take it from some1 who didnt.know struggles to get work,cause i dotn have that bit of paper that says "pass"

Oh,Im passin,and ta be truthful,nobody today really wanna hear truthful shit all da time.You can be ill without bein truthful,like me.I just get mad when a emcee tries ta diss me during his critique.Just say Im wack,I can take dat.
And Im only here ta practice on my bars and metas ta get betta so if I get signed,I wont be just another average emcee like some of dese signed rappers,feel me.

More feedback on dis please

I kno u aint talkin bout me bein wack
cuz u kno got damn well thats a Myth
2nd i wasent dissin i was jus lettin u kno up ya game
cuz tha shit was simple as fuck

*Nuff Said*

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Your shit sux dude, if you think you so much nicer than everyone else that posted feedback, we can easily take it to the frontlines, and i'll show you a thing or two lil' nigga.

-Cj-

Lets go I dont back down fa nobody,especially some washed up wannabe rapper like yaself,lil nigga

am i the only one that caught this? did this kid just say talib was wack? ahahahahhahahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahahha :laugh: hahahahahahhahahahahahahahhahhahaha :laugh: hahahahhahahhahahahahahahhaha :laugh: hahahhahahaha :laugh: .................................that comment speaks for itself....it just lets everybody know that you suck........if u have a problem with that....fuck off.......and take this criticism and run with it and be willing to elevate.....it was too basic...just like everyone is saying....dont use so much gunplay....nobody likes that...pick a topic to write about....you used decent multis....but seriously....thats not all that a verse consists of.....if you used those multis and there was a topic behind it....it could have been a nice piece......but unfortunately is was all about your gun and yourself.....so take this and make something good out of it....if u think im trying to diss you.....i dont care....but if you cant take these people opinions...you will never do anything with your music

Ok then,vote on my other one then,if dats wack,then I wont say nothin but thank you,even if you do diss me

You are wack, log out and run with scissor's.

i aint go hate but go stright to da point
it was decent,but it was elementry,you needs to elevate
i'd say get involved,and ah countree J is not a hata
he der to to critize to make you wanna get better,but
dats wit er'body,
holla
5/10

Vote on Lifes on the Line Remix and Ill return da favor if you currently made sumthin,tahnx alla yall.No hate CountreeJay

Take that fictional statement outta ya sig.
You are Not great.