Voted For: illmatico

You talkin crazy like a bitch from da ice age, trappin../
Being 1 with da mic neva was meant for upstage rappin/
...seemed like you forced this multi.What relevance does the word "trappin" have?
This bitch is a never was, M.A.F.i.A made that happen/
Destroyed this fucken has-been with my mind n my black pen .. /
...2nd line was a little stretched.Decent punch though
Run you down with my lines, neglectin the fucken traction/
AFter im done with ya, ill watch you rot and dissipate/
Leave u with nothin but your own death t' anticipate/
....Ehh,generic
I punch with nothin but iron fists and vocals/
K.O-in Big Ls, spittin with poison mists and chokholds/
....Decent

Ya "drug trade" is messed up and im here for collection
now ya punches sufferering because I missing the "connection"
...Ok,a little forced.
I'm comin up in the polls because im droppin a lame
ya gettin played like people who payed for that M.A.F.i.A game
....Good
You a waste of space rappin cuz its skills you lack
I'd put out a "hit" for you but you already "wacked"
....Played,
Not worthy for touchin my frame, all of ya punches i deflect
You could live up to ya name but a M.A.F.i.A requires respect
.....Nice
You deserve an Herb Award and get served a certificate
but from ya name on the paper you tellin us "i." is insignificant
....Good

ok,one sided battle..
MAfia,you need elevating.First off,don't force your multis.Like in your first line,the trappin part had nothing to do with the rest of the line.You just put the shit there to rhyme with rappin.And that's not something you can do...And you need better punches..

Vote-Illmatico

Drop an honest vote in the link below plz.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216400

This was feedback posted for M.A.F.i.A
 

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Voted For: illmatico

there's no real comparison here Illmat took this in just about every catagory...

Opener: Ill
Closer: Ill
Punches: Ill
Personals: Ill
Structure: Ill

Vote: ILL

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Voted For: illmatico

M.A.F.i.A
You talkin crazy like a bitch from da ice age, trappin../
Being 1 with da mic neva was meant for upstage rappin/
Bad punch...
This bitch is a never was, M.A.F.i.A made that happen/
Destroyed this fucken has-been with my mind n my black pen .. /
Run you down with my lines, neglectin the fucken traction/
Forced rhyme dude, not feeling../3 bar punch waaay to streched..
AFter im done with ya, ill watch you rot and dissipate/
Leave u with nothin but your own death t' anticipate/
Not really a punch..
I punch with nothin but iron fists and vocals/
K.O-in Big Ls, spittin with poison mists and chokholds/
Not really a punch either..

vs.

illmatico
Ya "drug trade" is messed up and im here for collection
now ya punches sufferering because I missing the "connection"
Nahh...
I'm comin up in the polls because im droppin a lame
ya gettin played like people who payed for that M.A.F.i.A game
Weak...
You a waste of space rappin cuz its skills you lack
I'd put out a "hit" for you but you already "wacked"
N00bish..
Not worthy for touchin my frame, all of ya punches i deflect
You could live up to ya name but a M.A.F.i.A requires respect
Best punch so far in this battle...
You deserve an Herb Award and get served a certificate
but from ya name on the paper you tellin us "i." is insignificant
Meh... good attmept at a nameplay..

Vote: illmatico

Didn't really like either verses, but yous was a bit better..

Voted For: illmatico

Vote - illmatico

Really like the personal illmatico had, this one:

You a waste of space rappin cuz its skills you lack
I'd put out a "hit" for you but you already "wacked"

-I don't know if that's played or not, but I liked it alot.

aiight, here's how I saw it...

Flow was a tie, both catz had it, I didn't like one flow over the other. illmatico took Punches, barely, because he subsequently took Personals, which complemented his punches pretty well...MAFIA took multis, they were alright, nothin' amazin' but better than some peepz on here. illmatico took wordplay, he had it, the other cat didn't...not a bad battle...pretty good shit from illmatico.