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Voted For: Waikiki Wipeout
Waikiki you took this due to the personals. and the better structure and flow. this shit was dope...good punches in my opinion....your structure was aiight. and your flow was koo. vocabulary was good. and you worded the shit correctly.... 7.22/10 J.r the only dope thing you had was punches and multi's but seriously dawg. you need to stop with that stretched shyt naww meanz. but overall this shit was pretty dope. i was feelin it....just fix your structure and flow and you should be good 5/10 vote: wai Can you return the favour and drop an honest vote on this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175364 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Waikiki Wipeout
lmao... yeah... this was a tite battle but I'm diggin' this new cats' style yo... he has fun when he rhymes... and he shows it when he types which is hard to do trust dat Quote:
Structure - wakiki multis-jr freeze punches-tie personals-waikiki flow-waikiki wordplay-neither Quote:
The fact that your winning J.R. makes me question the integrity of the RV voters. And your not bad at all beleive me I read most of your battles but you let your guard down on this one and you know it. And Waikiki just got the better of you but don't get down you got skills. One tip... personals... research your opponent next time you battle. Waikiki-keep truckin' you got potential and you will be a rv superstar if you start gettin' better. |
Voted For: J.R. Freeze
this battle was one sided the winner is JR Freeze i honestly dont think i have to break it down into lines because it is so obvious. Waikiki- ur verse wasn't bad at all, as a matter of fact the punches were pretty strong, its just J R had stronger ones, and he hand stronger multis, and a stronger opener and finisher. keep battling though Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for J.R. Freeze
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
J.R Freeze so took this one, i like it Wakiki, your punches and personals were a little lacking/weak, didnt really come as hard as freeze did and that killed you. not a very good opener, too simple and your and one dimensional, closer wasnt bad, coulda been worded differently thou...flow was nice, kept things consistent, originality was in there but couldnt not really that well of structure.....just elevate and you should be fine Freeze, sweet drop man, flow little choppy in areas, but nothing that cant be elevated....good punches that connected, personals were well thoughout, multis, just maybe variatize vocab/ideas, but thats all really i can say, really well done, nice drop, i like, especially the deaf kid line, that was orig and funny overall: Freeze, harder punches/personals, better structure/smoother flow, flat out came harder word |
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^ word, you should rtf in one of my links in my sig....giddy
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