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good, no cuz I was just checking, I didnt want you to go super easy on me... so I was just checking... good drop though... hopefully we get votes soon...
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........................ I got a plan to make peeps stop sleeping on this battle ;)
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This was feedback posted for headgames
I dont have 100 post fam but this is my breakdown..
Hotshh! had good structure and flow was at his tip top point..Clean opener..Vocab was used well in his drop..Punches came pretty hard and personals were decent as well..Multis lack a little bit in his verse though..Something i expected him to be well at...Metas came strong his drop..overall good job. Headgames...You had good structure also..Punches came OK..hit pretty decent not bad..Vocab wasnt lackin in ya verse like his..so yall are pretty close so far..Flow came solid and could understand everything you wre tryin to spit...Metas were aight in ya verse dis time..Multis were Good...personals were used not as much as i thought they would...overall Pretty Decent drop..coulda done betta if i could v/Hotshh!...im tellin da truth fam..headgames coulda won but he didnt drop alot of personals..and his opener was weak...just what im thinking hommie..no hate..~1~ |
.......... hotshh! wanna pm strobe to close this battle, and we can reopen another one, and drop the same verses but this time... i'll make it 600 posts to vote........
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guess so...............this is why i dont text anymore....actually this is my 1st text battle in 4 months
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This was feedback posted for hotshh!
looking hotshh! owned him but headgames will scream hate vote cuz hes a fag
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well shit, this is looking like a pointless waste of time now
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........ ok C.A.L.I lmao.... damn I really gotta herb that guy.... hotshh! be sure to vote on me and C.A.L.I's battle wehn it's done ;) fucking hating fag
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This was feedback posted for headgames
Yo hotshh!, headgames here, listen man, we gotta pm strobe, i'll pm him, ask if he can get into this batle and change the post count, otherwise man, we might have to get it closed and then re-open set a lower post count and then re-drop our SAME verse... peep my. battle vs. empire a.k.a C.A.L.I aight coo i'll hit up strobe tomorow peace
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do that.............................................. ...
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That Is Illegal To Tell People To Vote On Your Battle I Know Hotshh! Aint No Cheater But Its Still Illegal Dont Do That Again Fagboy
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This was feedback posted for headgames
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Voted For: hotshh!
HeadGames Kid What Happen I Saw You Do Way Better Before??? Anyway You Had Some Decent Punches In This Verse, Vocabulary Was Mostly Basic But Was Cool, Structure Was Decent, Need To Add Some Personals Into Here More Then What You Have, Also Multi's Would Of Helped You Out On This Verse, But You Didn't Have To Many, Meta's Would Of Made This Verse Better, But Your Body Of The Verse Was Decent Wasn't Feeling The Opener, But CLoser Was Good, I Liked The Last Line, Lol! Anyway OverAll........8.5/10 Hotshh! By Far Your Verse Was Decent, I Mean Punches Was In Order, Came Out With A Few Personals But Must I Remind You That Some Are Played, Structure Was As Well As Good, Opener And Closer Was Neat, Enjoyed Reading This, The body Of Your Verse Was Also Decentm Vocabulary, Nice Shit Coz, Third And Fourth Line Was Decent, Over All...8.8/10 Both Of You Came Hard, And Had Some Decent Punches But Hotshh! Came Harder By Two Points Over His Vocabulary And Punches, Personals Went To Both Of You, Coz It Was A Tie, Along With The Structure, Bot Of You Are Dope..... Vote=Hotshh! |
Voted For: hotshh!
hotshh! u still got it fam. u took this one with harder punches, and merked him in personals. structure was better too. headgames-i think u came too soft for me to give u my vote..keep elevating tho...i think u got skillz, but i think ur punches were a bit sry, and ur personals werent interesting at all...but u came wit it in some lines... overall- i think hotshh took this one, he had a better all around verse, and was more interesting opener-hot mettas-head punches-hot personals-hot multies-hot structure-hot closer-head v/hotshh! plz return tha favor xplained, cause i took tha time out to vote on this...battle link is in sig..pick one, try to pick a crew battle.... |
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