This was feedback posted for Sand
 

weak battle i thought nothin to quote from either....

sorry but seemed kinda rushed....

pz

word uppin

and acuity it aint stretched i made a mistake

This was feedback posted for .K.onfliktz
 

ckeckin polls......good battle here................

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Voted For: Sand

i dunno why im doing this. but i just was feelin karma's drop better. i think he came harder with punches and mettas, and even wordplay. both structures were good, so thats not a up for u...but i just think u came hard. both of yall's last bar was tha wackest of tha whole flow. karma had a better opener, and tha rest of his verse flowed well. kon-yo shit was clean, but i wasnt feelin it all. and its only 6 lines. u came hard with punches, and u got mad skilles, but i dont hthink u came hard enough. yo personals werent all that to me either, but elevate in that...karma, u got skilz, i think u should check out tha NOK forum...click link in my sig, and hit up that there tryout fam...but overall-i think this was a real close battle, but i was feelin karmas puncehs more....i dunno...just me..

Yall plz return tha vote on battle link in sig agaisnt CJ, last one...too many battles are gettin slept on in here. i took my time out to vote on this, so respect that plz. and make it xplained, cuase this is xplained...


good drops...no hate...elevate always

~1~

Voted For: Sand

aight you win


KON... your structure was mad off work on that shit....also your lines are played as fuck no real good personals are anygood metaphores....i didnt see snything that cought my...your opener was weak....i understand how you set it up ....the st up was nice but it was a stupid punch......if your opener would have been a lil more better....OR if you would have posted a pci of him so that we no this kid looks lieka monkey...but thats hit just didnt hit

SAND: your shit was also hela weak.....i understand your a VET on RB but here on RV you need to eelavte alot more.....try to work on your wordplay and your metaphores...structur was kinda nice but your lines were streched........you only one this battle because of your one good personal
This bitch think's just cuz his dad's a crip, automatically make's you ghetto?

^^that shit was weakly set up and was super streched but it hit hard.....

vote=sand

Voted For: Sand

Monkey Speaks Giberish, Sand's Lingo, Only a guerilla Could Understand
This Kid Really Has Trouble Elevatin, He's Still On The First Form of Man!
decent punch, flow was good
Pm'd Me Statin He Was Bored-N-wanted to battle, Pre-write? No Surprise?
But Dat Wasnt The Case,I realized dis Nasty Fuck Likes Gettin
Beat By Guys Your Futures not Existent like 28-02-06 Times Up, Your Hour Glass?
finished
So Strut Your ass back over to RB, where Herbs Suck your Dick for a livin'

fuck it…couldn’t imagine ur drop…ur structure got me confused
but I read it an it was aight…hardly even rhymed though

Kon, Look at your record, the battle figure's highlight ya fatigue.
I mean, you've hit rock bottom, like you been dropped in the sea.
decent punch, it landed
This bitch think's just cuz his dad's a crip, automatically make's you ghetto?
Kon couldn't be part of the street if you hung from a ledge and let go.
decent persona bout the ghetto…punch was weak but aight
Kon's like bulletproof glass, act's hard, but Sand can see right through.
Plus since all your audio's are wack......The microphone spit's back at you!
nice punch

overall you had a nice drop…ur last line took it for you
ur flow was aight…and the structure was okay

Voted For: Sand

Kon, Look at your record, the battle figure's highlight ya fatigue.
I mean, you've hit rock bottom, like you been dropped in the sea.
^^^please that was just sorry
This bitch think's just cuz his dad's a crip, automatically make's you ghetto?
Kon couldn't be part of the street if you hung from a ledge and let go.
^^^ ok but no great
Kon's like bulletproof glass, act's hard, but Sand can see right through.
Plus since all your audio's are wack......The microphone spit's back at you!
^^^ nice closer well not really good as a closer but good line.

^^^ over all good flow and style was cool. so i'm give it a 3/7
advise: stop talking to the readers and talk to him, add more mults and punches(especially since it's a short battle), talk about thing that the readers would no about him.

Monkey Speaks Giberish, Sand's Lingo, Only a guerilla Could Understand
This Kid Really Has Trouble Elevatin, He's Still On The First Form of Man!
^^^still on the first form of man? i don't understand so wack
Pm'd Me Statin He Was Bored-N-wanted to battle, Pre-write? No Surprise?
But Dat Wasnt The Case,I realized dis Nasty Fuck Likes Gettin
^^^you put three words on the wrong line lololol but the line woulda still been wack
Beat By Guys Your Futures not Existent like 28-02-06 Times Up, Your Hour Glass? finished
So Strut Your ass back over to RB, where Herbs Suck your Dick for a livin'
^^^i think that the last two lines should be switched and then i woulda liked the closer

^^^ over all a good style and flow. so i'ma give you a 2/7
Advise: mostly the same for you as for him but you also gotta reread and see if you mis spelled shit(or put words on the wrong line wink wink)

vote: sand or karmabarz (cause the title is sand but his verse say karmabarz)