uppin yall........................................

yo up the fuck outta this somebody drop a vote please

This was feedback posted for Blackmage
 

blackmage u need 2 work on ur wordplay more & elevate in ur rhymes more

Yo up this man i need one more vote for a knockout so can we hurry up please

yo up this man i gotta go i got shit to do..............

Voted For: Blackmage

ok this easily goes to blackmage......
mafia had too much self glory in his verse....concentrate more on punches instead of self glory...its gets you nowhere....you have potential to be good...but your just gonna have to work on it.....too much self glory in your verse.....

blackmage had some pretty good punches in his verse....some of them werent as good as others....but it was more than enough to get it done....

overall this goes to blackmage for harder hitting punches....better structure...and just overall a way better verse....and mafia used too much self glory