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Sik Wit It 02-06-05 12:27 AM

Voted For: ~Da_Illest~

ur style of rap is made up like a book of fables//
i'll lyrically kill u like bacc in ancient times i'm caine ur abel//
decent punch
even if i had no feet i still won't lose a step against u//
cuz my lines would roll ova u more den a woman's hairdo//
weak punch, shouldve switch’d it…
there's no choice u can score, like u talkin 2 a nun//
so i guess u must as well add 2 ur lost column by 1
punch was okay…not really hard hittin

Yo I'm the god that'll smite ya crews..
You the muthafucka to pick a fight wit a dike n lose
weak punch…didn’t really land
Reneg@de stay paid...lay in the shade
Been rhymin for a lifetime, ya shits just minute maid
punch was okay, weak tho
Spit again me I come hard like wild boar
Or a genius battlin an ~ILL~iterate retard
weak closer

Overall da_illest took this one, came less weak in this battle
And the structure was better too

LogiTek 9 02-06-05 09:32 PM

Voted For: Reneg@de

Renegade is my vote

niether used personals

Renegade had an undeniable flow wit medium punches his shit was just well rounded plus vocab was displayed

Ill some of ya stuff was definetly forced with out a great flow and a small vocab

.Ike. 02-06-05 10:45 PM

Voted For: ~Da_Illest~

da illest......
ur style of rap is made up like a book of fables//
i'll lyrically kill u like bacc in ancient times i'm caine ur abel//
ehh ok opener....5/10

even if i had no feet i still won't lose a step against u//
cuz my lines would roll ova u more den a woman's hairdo//
ok attempt at wordplay here.....6/10

there's no choice u can score, like u talkin 2 a nun//
so i guess u must as well add 2 ur lost column by 1
kinda played here.....4/10


overall...........15/30


renegade.........
Yo I'm the god that'll smite ya crews..
You the muthafucka to pick a fight wit a dike n lose
good multis....but thats all....4/10

Reneg@de stay paid...lay in the shade
Been rhymin for a lifetime, ya shits just minute maid
set up line is garbage...didnt hit....3/10

Spit again me I come hard like wild boar
Or a genius battlin an ~ILL~iterate retard
ehh not feelin it....4/10

Shotgun shells will turn this yellow belly white
And I beat this superwoman with a kryptonite mic
decent wordplay here....6/10

Or throw slugs like C Batteries and leave you Energiez
Like Walla walla I got this W no need to be surprised
good set up line....punch was weak...5/10


overall......22/50


i just felt that renegade didnt come with as hard of punches as illest did.....both had ok wordplay...both had bad structure....illests punches won this for him.....

MaRVJay 02-06-05 11:16 PM

Voted For: Reneg@de

u got dis hands down fam....

Yo I'm the god that'll smite ya crews..
You the muthafucka to pick a fight wit a dike n lose
^^^okay opener nice lil flow rite there...

Reneg@de stay paid...lay in the shade
Been rhymin for a lifetime, ya shits just minute maid
^^^weak

Spit again me I come hard like wild boar
Or a genius battlin an ~ILL~iterate retard
^^^good personal with ILL shit...

Shotgun shells will turn this yellow belly white
And I beat this superwoman with a kryptonite mic
^^^NO..

Or throw slugs like C Batteries and leave you Energiez
Like Walla walla I got this W no need to be surprised
^^^ HUH??
overall...renegade had a good verse some shit u just dont need da say in battle fam 4real

ur style of rap is made up like a book of fables//
i'll lyrically kill u like bacc in ancient times i'm caine ur abel//
^^OKAY OPENER...

even if i had no feet i still won't lose a step against u//
cuz my lines would roll ova u more den a woman's hairdo//
^^^WEAK AS FUKK

there's no choice u can score, like u talkin 2 a nun//
so i guess u must as well add 2 ur lost column by 1
^^^U LOST.....

plain and simp fam u had no punchlines,personals no creativity


return da favor link in da sig

Javelin 02-06-05 11:27 PM

Voted For: Reneg@de

Renegade, your flows were much better,
your punches were much greater,
and your vocab was killer

Da ill, work on your flow man

one sided battle


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