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jdot winnin another battle...but it wont get done wit

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Voted For: D.T.

Damn.. nice battle here, but imma go wit Epical on this one...

J-Dot, you had a nice verse...First line was wack, honestly... threaten to kill you? wasn't feelin ya opener.. but u got better as u went on.. the "kill the beef" line was good, but a lil played.. Shaq line was not bad, jus way played, seen it comin.. I liked the Iraq line.. it didn't come all the way together.. didint understand how I rack and ANthrax related to each other, but it was a nice line.. lazy boy line was good too, and ya closer was prolly ya best line... I think you coulda worked on complexity and personals, u had decent punches but coulda come wit more personals and a more complex verse.. not bad tho

Epical, nice verse here too.. Openr was aiite, but the retard line was kinda played.. seen shit like it before... A lil stretched but not bad... Ya 2nd bar was dope, nice line there wit a nice personal tied in...I wasn't really understandin ya Pencils line, didn't come together for me.. THe All of RV and Barbie lines was nice, nice personal there.. The Arm amputees line was way played, jus way played out.. not a bad line tho, jus coulda been more original.. Ya closer started off nice wit the walt disney line, but the last line was self glorification.. not a bad line, but shoulda kept it outta a battle... I think you had a more complex verse with better and more personals, and nice punches throughout...

Overall, Epical takes this with more complexity and better and harder hittin personals... JDot nice verse, just coulda had more personals, and coulda came wit more complex shit, so my vote goes to Epical..

V/Epical

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J DoT: Had some decent punches, some nice word play, not many personals. He had the better flow than D.T. J Dot, I liked your style, but you didnt punch hard enough, if ya would of worded them better, it woulda been nicer. No beef homie, but you shoulda done a bit better on wording your punches.

D.T.: I liked your drop. You have a couple personals in there, none really that caught my eye, but they were aight. Your punch lines landed harder than Jay Dot. You came all around harder than J Dot. Your flow was alittle off though in some parts.

Overall: D.T gets my vote, cause he had the better punches, and they seemed to be worded better than Jay Dots. Nice battle all together. Jay word your punches better, and you could be better that way. Good job both of yall.

animated votes...but whatever...

uppin this shit.......

Voted For: J DOT

good verse from both of you this was a good battle....

epical...

Your Crew Aint Worth Saving Coz Like Retards You Don't Finish What You Start
His Crew's Falling Apart So Quick His Co Leader Doesn't Have Time To Depart
^^ ok punch nice opener
J Dot Get's Emotional Coz TheWhackest Call's Him The Punchline Genious
Coz like Lay's Potato Chips, J Dot Could Never Get Nuff Of Tha Q's Penis
^^ haha good personal and good punch
Only Way He Spitting Straight Is If His Rap's Came In Perfect Stencils
His Writing Is Like, Amateurs Coz His Mentals Is Allergic To Pencils
^^ niceeeee i like this line
Knock Out Queens Couldn't Hold The Thrown If They Bribed All Of RV
Drama Queens Coz Like Malibu's Ken J Dot Left To Play With Barbie's
^^ not bad but i aint feelin it
Go Back To Arbies, So You Can Try And Ketchup On What I'm Teaching
His Punches Is like Arm Amputees, He Swinging But It's Not Reaching
^^ alryyt punch
His Imaginated Scheme Of Merking Me Is like Walt Disneys Pictures.....
This Kid's Flow Compared To Mine Is Like Flash Lights To Light Fixures.......
^^ decent closure

overall i thought you had a solid verse with some solid punches... i liked most of your lines but there was a few that didn't hit as hard as your others... your structure was good and your flow was on point all the way through your vocab was decent and you had a good solid verse well done...

j dot...

I'l burn ya house, circle tha block and watch it rot
And threaten to kill u if u ever tried to tell tha cops
^^ alryyt opener but played punch
I got this on lock...Fuck wit DOT, u come up short
This nigga wanted to 'kill beef', so he showed up with 'forks'
^^ haha decent and funny punch
Tryna feast with me...ya head'll meet ya feet
I run the 'center like O'Neal', cause i keeps 'Tha Heat'
^^ niceee wordplay and decent punch
Have some decency...to admit ya crew is weak
u, you leader, yo fans...and tha fags yall breed
^^ ooo nice personal
N.O.K. got this B...and yo team lack skillz
in this battle 'I Rack' (IRAQ) wins, to show how 'Anthrax Killz'
^^ dayumm your on fire thsi was hot
I mastered tha best, u gaspin for breath, im snappin yo neck
...Beg for mercy now, while im graspin tha tech
^^ good use of multies and decent punch
Im laughin to death...cause u just a 'Lazy Boy' kid
U 'Comfortable losing...it shows it in yo sig
^^ nice personal here
Twitzed Government...and now we kno u wack
Save the embarrassment of yo crew, and dont spit back
^^ alryyt closure but a bit of a weak punch...

overall i really liked your verse you had better punches and your structure was better... your flow was off point in some parts but you brought it back up... i thought you had a couple of played punches but the rest of your personals and punches made up for it... your vocab wasn't as good as epicals but you dont really need decent vocab to have a decent verse like you did...

im giveing this to j dot because his punches hit harder... personals were better.. the structure was better and i thought he had a better verse overall.... good battle though no hate pz.


v/ j dot

uppin this..kid is wack!!

3-1....it should be 3-0...

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Checkin tha polls, nice drop J u got this.........

uppin this battle......NOK bout to bring one home...............

uppin for votes............................................

uppin....21 dayz is comin up, this is soon to be closed since people dont vote no more...

JDOT

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good job, we gon' win

Uppin This Shit For One More Jdot Vote..to Get It Closed...people