Voted For: EyeDentdy

hmmm...I vote for identity still...lord wun came hard too...aiight battle...I was feeling the punches but I say Eyedenty took this still...

Voted For: Lord.Wun

damn man lol someone was angry angry when they wrote this one but damn it was good man .. it was st8 n ill. hot drop .. you kept it goin'n the whole way through you didn't let up at all lol you was like a fat kid sitt'n on the skinny kid on the slide haha

...punches//lord
metas//lord
personals...///....hmmm lol lord
structure//lord
wordplay//lord
appeal//lord
opener//lord
closer//lord

it was godly man ha

feel'n that verse...eyedentdy you had a good line but it was nothing compared to lord.wun sorry man but it wasnt


vote//Lord.Wun


return the favor check out my battle

uppin this fuckin battle........site has no voters at all..

:laugh2: haha what the hell you smok'n? he smashed on him haha :laugh2:

get that crackass vote outta here man you need to break it down..

Voted For: Lord.Wun

who let the chink into battle mode, I spit bars like bricks/
U watch too much t.v., this aint a Bruse Lee flick/
THE LINE WAS GOOD BUT THE PUNCH WAS WEAK
Aint no equal oppertunitys, Its a blessing to loose to me/
U get voted off this bloodfest wit no emmunity/
My Rapstyles Beat emcees Brutally, U nothing new to me/
FIRST LINE SELF GLORY SECEOND LINE OK PUNCH THIRD LINE WEAK PUNCH
I dont even have to finish Just to win this/
My level of elivated rap Belongs in the books of guiness/
if Ur boys wanted beef too, I'll overcook the witness/
FIRST LINE SELF GLORY SECOND LINE SELF GLORY THIRD LINE OK PUNCH
I'll make u cough blood Onto ur screen/
who ever said U was as ill as me, forgot to tell U life aint nothing but a dream/
WEAK LINE HERE PUNCH LACKED

Fuck It Kid, Only Time Your Skillz is "Uppin" Is when You Lookin For Votes..
Shotguns Blast "sea Shells" Have Him "sea Sick" Like Hookin To Boats..
GOOD LINE WITH WORDPLAY BAD SET UP THOUGH
Eydenty? This Dude never had one in the first place, He's A fuckin nobody..
Fuckin Fag, You aint Sick, Jea He "murder's Ink"..When he's blowin gotti..
GOOD LINE HERE WITH NICE PUNCH
Blast ya brains on da wall, so i can read dis Hoes memory like Computers..
imma Mathamatician...Imma add to ya record, so declare me ya Tutour..
OK LINE HERE PUNCH WAS WEAK THOUGH
but nigga im gutta, I Use You To make bread, Like you was fuckin butta..
For this battle, imma give you 2 losses, like My Fuckin Verse Stuttered..
THIS WAS AN OK LINE HERE NICE SET UP OK PUNCH
Its Over, Like Dem Straight A Geaks, You The First To Get Finished..
Kill You ANd Ya Muscle, Like a Nigga Had Some Bad Spinidge, consider you,
BAD CLOSER ESPECIALLY COMPARED TO THE REST OF YOUR VERSE BUT OKAY LINE OVERALL

Eyedentdy had a good flo with his cause i caught on to the triple line flo even but it seems his punches were weak. His multis and flo were very good but there was too much self glory his only real insult was calling him a "chink" which is the equivalent of having called you a "nigger" which isn't a real insult that's just low. Lord wun had alright punches but he seems like he ran out of juice at the end. They were still decent though.

v/ Lord.Wun

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177825
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This was feedback posted for EyeDentdy
 

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Voted For: Lord.Wun

vote for Lord becuz he had more punches, and personals and overall better verse, Eye had some good multis but its the punches and overall verse that caught my eye from Lord

http://community.rapverse.com/showb............return da favor please

Voted For: Lord.Wun

im givin this to lord wun just becuse hes verse made sense eyedenaty its a battle dont diss his friends go at him