Voted For: **GHOSTE**

ghoste...
i dunno wut this dudes thinking, trynna battle with the best/
at 2-3, wit 1 no-sho win, only thing this dude is, is blest/
pretty nice opener here....good personal....7/10

so *elavate ya rhymes* because im *raisin da bar*/(GET IT?!)
but dis dude is hopeless....shit.....HE STOLE HIS NAME FROM A CAR!/
lol...good play off name here.....good wordplay...8/10

well ill leave this bitch in da *junkyard*, wit a *ford and an elantra*/
shit, ive seen wheel chairs that can *roll* betta then hondas/
ehh wasnt feelin it....4/10

now lemme *shift gears* fo a second, and concentrate on ya rhymes/
this dudes got less *punches* to throw, then boxers wit no arms/
didnt rhyme....hit ok....5/10

hes a *honda integra*...................but all his *seats* are fulla junk/
shit ill kidnap this fag and stuff his ass in his own trunk/
decent......5/10

as a final thought to dis battle, ima end this fags career/
shit, his verse is so boring, even *HES FALLIN ASLEEP AT THE WHEEL*/
nice closer.....7/10

overall..............36/60


Integra..................
You Think You Ownin Me In This "Race"? Ayo, They Can't Call This "Rookie" The Next "Masta Ace"
5 Seconds In The Battle & You Runout Like "Disk Space"!
not feelin it.....fix your structure...its hard to read....4/10

It Would Be A "Disgrace" To "Pass Ya A Cookie"
For A Fact You Lack "Mastering To Keep Up At My Pace" Like A Beat Up `77 "Suzuki"
decent......5/10

Your The Type Droppin Out The Pro's League Like A Plane Crashing In "Rainy Weather"
You Get Homosexual Compainionship Having To Ask Males To "Pull Up At The Party Together"
ehh gay jokes=played....5/10

Even If Ya Werent Invisible Like Any Ghosts I'd Bet 500 This Wanksta Gets Ignored In The "Capital Of Japan"
I Seen Him Somewhere Before? Oh Yeah With Pride Bein Gay Like The Pink One On "Pacman"!
ehh didnt land well.....5/10

With The Rhymes I'm Spittin I Get Publicity Like Ben Afflec & Jin "Rollin On MTV"!
No Wonder You Live Your Life Portable Like Eminem Living Out "A Stolen ATV"!
ehh decent...6/10

Spray Some Nitro On This Fake MC, And He Burns Out Of Existance Like "Vehicle Gas"
Face The Fact Nigga That You Land Your 1st Loss "As I Pass"!
not feelin it.....4/10


overall........29/60



basically i felt that ghoste came with harder punches, better plays off of his name, and better personals, and better structure....both had pretty good drops....i just felt that ghostes was a lot better considering that his punches landed better

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Voted For: InTeGrA

this battle could really have been alot better. both of yall need to come harder wit ur flow n structure. esp ya structure shit was bad to read for both. but ima go wit integra bcuz more of his verse made sense and he had better punches for the most part. alot of ghosts verse didnt rhyme very well n that hurt him alot n his punches were pretty weak in this one
integras werent much better but they were enuff to pull away wit a win. (no pun intended). both of yall work on puttin in some multies for ya verse to mix it up a lil bit
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Voted For: **GHOSTE**

u won dis only cuzz u had some personals but alot of ya bars aint ryhme...like RYHMES & ARMS....CAREER & WHEEL...fix dat shit fam.....integ ya structure was terrible and ya bars were so long dat it a take a minute 2 flow em and ur punches were weak u had no personals even tho u spit more still dont mean shit if u aint sayin nothin hott

opener-ghost kind of weak but betta than his
structure-ghost..integ ya lines were 2 long stop tryind a fit so much shit in dem
punchlines-ghost
creatvity-ghost
multis-integ
wordplay-nun
personals-ghost
finisher-integ...ghost shit aint ryhme
enjoyed-ghost...he had a betta verse overall

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Voted For: InTeGrA

votin for Integra

This goes to Integra

Reason:

Integra looks like he put alot more into this battle then ghoste

Wordplay: Integra took it his whole verse was off the chain with wordplay he fit it perfectly
Flow both had descient flow But Integra once again wit the wordplay jus tore it up with flow
Punches Integra took thsi his punches were off the hook n very creative

Ghoste ya verse was good no doubt but ya punches were a little original n ya flow was a lil tipsy not to mention u lost track of the mission ( to battle) u seemed to have no wordplay it was all original I seen a few of ur punches in other battles to fam

Integra ya structure was a lil off but u made up for it wit good punches nice wordplay

Multies didnt see many so tied up

So it goes like dis :
Punches- Integra
Wordplay- Integra
Flow- Integra
structure- Neither
Personals - Neither

overall rating:
Integra- given a a 9/10
Deductions: not many personals, n crazy structure

Ghoste- given ya a 6/10
Deductions: Weak Punches,Not many Perosnals, off flow

Good Battle fams
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This was feedback posted for **GHOSTE**
 

nice shit check innnn them polls ..........................

wut kinda bullshit vote was that^...

did u even read both fuckin verses...all them other people even said he had no flow...and them punches wasnt creative...DAMN!!! u dumb...

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Voted For: InTeGrA

Integra got this fa sho

Much more complex punches
Dunno if ya new or what GHOST, But ya had some okay wordplay, ya tried ta be creative, but some of ya shit was played out

Integras verse hit harder so i'ma give him my vote

Peace

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