uppin for feedback....

pretty good flows well the words you used were alot diffrent not so long but they're something most people wouldnt think of so i guess thats good vocab, good stucture some alright emotion not really there most of it but not bad for emotion the creativty was hella ther and the imagery was alright but it was good...good peice

you should come to The Establishment, word

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this was cool pro, had some good flow and i liked the loyd banks line and shit, has some good structure, really i would ask you to change is the hook ya feel?