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blitz 02-05-05 05:55 AM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

close battle im going to have to give my vote to c.a.l.i both came hard with persnals and punches hard battle to vote on very close but c.a.l.i just take this with the punches and persnals dj u came good 2 i like the start word thing but u used to much explaining took away the effect of the verse a bit so i thin c.a.l.i took this came hard but both keep doing ya thing

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DQ 02-05-05 09:42 AM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

d.j em sce

Because caliph got merked, denied, and all his battles got slept
We where all elevating except him so he asked how to become a vet
^nice opener

Know one knew caliph so he began feeling sorrow and grief
That is probably the reason he started all of this unnecessary beef
^could've been worded better to hit harder

All the facts led to this anonymous man to disappear from RV
Empires anger would grow, once I kicked him out of my army
^nope...

Come to think of it, he tried to harm me; he thought he was the nicest
Too many loses headed him in the direction of an identity crisis
^last line okay,not feeling first

An he’s “Strictly audio” because if he was ja rule he still wont murder inc
End of discussion, CALI your life has just been wrapped up in a link
^like first line,second was just to end it...

Overall good battle but you could've worded some things better so they hit harder.Punches n personals were good,vocab was nice and structure was cool. Had your flow on lock but I think you could've come harder...


C.A.L.I


Ask this bitch he thought his 'Class' was 'Sic' and we cured it
Cuz his hardest lines is just dried up poop basically old birdshit
^hehe,nice opener

You fell off bitch look most ya personals and disses is played
Punches missing all off like the...like the crooked ass line in ya fade!
^good good..

Claim he a M.C (em sce) but spelled it all wrong
Cuz the truth is he softer then old Patti Labelle songs
^good set-up...

Best dickrider on rapverse somebody quick hand him a saddle
Cuz what kind of 'D.J' or 'EM SCE' ducks a AUDIO BATTLE!
^hehe,oh so true...lol...

Im tired of you running round telling everybody you dope
Answer this if you so nice..why you gotta beg for votes?!
^haha,nice...

Wasnt in no way 'CREATIVE' so you changed ya name back
Cuz even ya avy looking confused 'like hol on.....

HIP-HOP under this name dont match!!'
^dope closer

Dope battle,had hardhitting personals and punches in there,vocab was good and structure was tight.Definately feeling your flow, my favo line was the one with the audio battle. It seemed as if you had a more aggressive tone to your verse compared to his so that's why my vote goes to you...

50Cal. 02-05-05 02:09 PM

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Status 02-05-05 05:25 PM

these seems as if they are all d/r votes..........

Da Vinci 02-05-05 06:51 PM

This was feedback posted for d.j em sce
 
Hot battle shoudl be a good one.
Good Luck to both

50Cal. 02-06-05 04:06 AM

Sun You Lost Your Verse Is Wack And Thats Word Get Over Yourself Your Punches Were Wack And Played Stop Being A Fag And Realize Im Better Then You Stupid Fucking Homo Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

Status 02-06-05 04:16 AM

your not better than me......in my opinion personals win battles so that is why all i had was personals..........plus i got writers block......just got that shit last week.....and i was mad stressin over hella shit


uppin for some votes...

word is bond~

~Lady Fiya~ 02-06-05 02:09 PM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

Cali-
Ask this bitch he thought his 'Class' was 'Sic' and we cured it
Cuz his hardest lines is just dried up poop basically old birdshit
^^lol... best opener..
You fell off bitch look most ya personals and disses is played
Punches missing all off like the...like the crooked ass line in ya fade!
^^nice personal.. lmfao
Claim he a M.C (em sce) but spelled it all wrong
Cuz the truth is he softer then old Patti Labelle songs
one of ya best bars so far.. pretty good..
Best dickrider on rapverse somebody quick hand him a saddle
Cuz what kind of 'D.J' or 'EM SCE' ducks a AUDIO BATTLE!
no this is the best bar. lmao.. nice personal LMFAO
Im tired of you running round telling everybody you dope
Answer this if you so nice..why you gotta beg for votes?!
^^decent personal..
Wasnt in no way 'CREATIVE' so you changed ya name back
Cuz even ya avy looking confused 'like hol on.....

HIP-HOP under this name dont match!!'
Terrible closer........ blah this was wack..

Overall Your verse stood out with the infinite personals.. you played his name all over it. Real Hard-hittin lines fa real. and creative at the least.. best battle i seen you drop so far.. this was sic.

DJ Em sce:
Because caliph got merked, denied, and all his battles got slept
We where all elevating except him so he asked how to become a vet
^^this was not effective what was the point?
Know one knew caliph so he began feeling sorrow and grief
That is probably the reason he started all of this unnecessary beef
aight personal, well not really... dunno your point of this one either, fa real this is pointless ATTACK SOMETIME SOON
All the facts led to this anonymous man to disappear from RV
Empires anger would grow, once I kicked him out of my army
^^aight you picked up on this one, nice meta not bad
Come to think of it, he tried to harm me; he thought he was the nicest
Too many loses headed him in the direction of an identity crisis
^^nice personal.. coulda been worded better tho
An he’s “Strictly audio” because if he was ja rule he still wont murder inc
End of discussion, CALI your life has just been wrapped up in a link
^^aight the murder inc is pretty played now.. second half was aight....

Aight creativite i expected you to come way harder than this. Cali killed you wit personals and he had better punches this time..

V/ Cali

Status 02-06-05 02:13 PM

yes....but i was really counting on my creativity..to win this...its like oyu guys are ignoring the fact that i made up a hidden bar.....and actually took the time to make it say somehting down the side......wtf...

~Lady Fiya~ 02-06-05 02:23 PM

i seen that and that was creative BUT that didn't help your verse so i didn't even have to mention the hidden message you had along the side.. i didn't find that effective at all.. no hate, either.. just sayin cuz i seen you drop real dope shit way better than this one you did.. and yea i did expect way more outta ya verse than that... no b/s just truth.. i'm out..
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N.Tavarez 02-06-05 03:11 PM

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 
damn i sense the animosity....wow!
good shit both

50Cal. 02-06-05 04:33 PM

Dj Thats No Em Sce You Lost Stop Crying Your Shit Was Wacked Nobody Cares Bout The Name Shit Down The Side Who Gives A Fuck?it Wasnt Dope Or A Personal And Its Been Done Before What Did You Do So Dope?nothing Your Punches Were Weak And Played:nono:

50Cal. 02-09-05 07:37 PM

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Magic5 02-09-05 07:44 PM

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 
I just wanna check the polls..

CAUSE IM GANGSTA!

M-Eazy 02-12-05 05:35 PM

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 
checkin polls.
i dont know who took this one...ima break it down
opener-DJ
personals-DJ
punches-CALI
metas-none
wordplay-cali
structure-DJ
closer-cali

THATS ALL I SEEN IN THIS ONE. I DONT KNOW WHO GOT THIS ONE, THIS WAS A CLOSE BATTLE. I WAS FEELIN BOTH THA DROPS
DJ-I WAS FEELIN YO VERSE. OF COURSE U TOOK THA PERSONALS CATEGORY. U HAD TRUTH BEHIND YO VERSE, AND THIS WAS A REAL BATTLE, BUT IF IT WASNT TEXT, U WOULDVE REALLY TOOK IT. I WAS FEELIN YO STRUCTURE, I THINK U CAME HARDER WIT THAT, AND ELEVATED ALOT,BUT I WASNT FEELIN HOW U JUST FOCUSED ON UR PERSONALS, AND THATS IT, U SHOULDVE CAME HARDER AND FOCUSED MORE ON PUNCHES AND OTHER SHIT...ELEVATE WIT THAT
CALI-U HAD SOME ORIGINAL SHIT IN THERE, AND I WAS FEELIN THAT. I WASNT FEELIN YO STRUCTURE, IT DIED DOWN IN THA MIDDLE OF UR VERSE, AND U WAS FALLIN OFF WIT IT WEN IT GOT TO THA END. ELEVATE ON THAT, BUT I THINK U CAME WAYY HARDER IN PUNCHES AND WORDPLAY AND SHIT. YO CLOSER WAS NICE, BUT NOT ALL UR LINES WERE NICE LIKE THAT, I THINK IF U WOULDVE CAME MORE CONSISTENT IN THIS ONE, U WOULDVE GOT THA VOTE FROM ME. ELEVATE ON THAT
OVERALL-I WAS FEELIN THIS BATTLE. I THINK IT WAS A NICE BATTLE, AND NECK 2 NECK, I DONT REALLY KNO WHO TOOK THIS ONE. SRY, I CANT VOTE ON THIS ONE, BUT I LEFT REAL FEEDBACK, SO IT WOULD BE APPRECIATED IF U WOULD DO THA SAME, OR EVEN VOTE ON ONE OF THA BATTLES IN SIG...


~PEACE~


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