ur good wit ur poetry joints if u droppin' deep shit like dat overall it was on point
make sure 2 return the favor in my open mic

uppyn thys.......

uppyn thys shyt.

yea man thats cool man how you described two differnt worlds its deep man keep it up

im lookin foward to your next poem i no it will be deep

i liked this .. i liked your vocab in the heaven part.. the hell part came off a little slow at first but over all i liked it alot.. nice choice of vocab .....i'm really feel'n the heaven part i thought it was a very nice piece.. keep it up ..