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Dabatos 02-09-05 09:26 PM

Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade

ok punches both of you lacked nothing stuck out at all you came played with no good personals i was dissapointed one of the worst battles ive seen on rv do some investigating get some hard hitting punches personals some witty metas
structure you other guy wasnt feeling it you have alot of fillers khaos lose the ...
vocab neither go onto rhymezone.com it will help with your vocab and flow
good battle to both but im giving it to khaos i think he edged it otu both need to elevate though

Khaos_daRenegade 02-10-05 10:15 AM

thanx for the vote uppin this shit for more votes^^^^^^

Technical 02-10-05 07:09 PM

Voted For: Golden shellz

pucnhes- GS had more clear thought out punches

personals- that 1-8-7 line did it for me...GS got this

wordplay- none of yall really

creativity- GS had this....not by much though, cuz that mexican line is played as fuck yo

vote- GS cuz of punches....whack battle though

Golden shellz 02-10-05 07:22 PM

jea jea jea uppin iight yallz***********************

Khaos_daRenegade 02-11-05 10:19 AM

lol, this shit is funny. dis nigga's punches huh? what fuckin punches i cant beileive this shit uppin this shit

Golden shellz 02-11-05 05:28 PM

ookkk uppin cmon just one more vote and this is done~~~

.Ike. 02-11-05 05:47 PM

Voted For: Golden shellz

Golden........
ur a fuckin renegade? old like em and jay in da past
get rid of this newbie fast, my bloods'll 1-8-7 ya ass
nice opener.....hit good...6/10

quick to challenge a lethal threat but u have no prominence
like a mexican, u could "hop"the fence,smashed by my dominence
ok pretty good here...5/10

u got 3 days nigga, i hope u make in time
matter fact i should say fuck this verse and see if hes online
decent...5/10

ur not even woth my lines, better yet worth my rhymes
every vote i get is me tellin u 5 times*
ehh ok...4/10

ur fucked now, i could spare u become a beggar
i have ya shirts lookin more red then the tomatoe that hit swartzaneggar
decent....4/10

overall.....24/50


Khaos......
goldenshellz battle me, whoa son is bold....
but he garbage, only hot when my gun explode....
ehh ok...gunplay not good...4/10

dis cat feelin kinda sad somebody give him a hug....
cuz aint no gunpowder in him so dis nigga's a dud...
decent hit good...6/10

i shoot da nine and put some of u in yaself...
den laugh at u, like dummy stop abusin yaself...
ok......5/10

tell me why dis nigga gotta be so lame...
and why khaos spit dope shit like he eat cocaine...
umm this was self glory...would been dope if it was just a line for audio or somethin...but not good for a battle.....2/10

and with yo name the whole board knows u silly...
like "diarhea" dawg ya fuckin "flows is shitty"...
ok wordplay....6/10

overall.....23/50

i thought that overall goldens punches hit better....and that self glory line killed khaos...thats not good man...dont use self glory in a battle verse.....good battle though....it was close.....vote goes to golden for harder punches


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