Sandwich Lines He Used Already

Sticky Bandit Vs Kordozar
Go Back To "Wrapping" Your "Subway Sandwitches"

Disney Line Used Plenty Times

Sticky Bandit Vs Kordozar
You Beating Me???Your Imagination Must Be Like Disney Pictures

Usin Tha Same Wacc As Lines Damn Shame

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Voted For: Epic

aight yo this was an aight battle.. not to spectacular but it was good and here is my break down

Epic- shit was aight man. structure needs work tho brow cause it was kinda all over the place... didnt hurt ya flow to badly here but could in the future... punches were TIGHT i liked the walt disney line the best and you also had some tight personals in t here to man. Lmao "Julius having a Seizure" lol i liked that yo... good metas... vocab was aight... would have liked more multis but it was aight... overall 6.5/10

Life- not bad... like epic work on that structure man... lines are kinda stretched and all over the place... flow was ok tho through out the verse as a whole... punches lacked the hard hitting shit that is needed to win battles.. they werent consistant... personals were aight.. vocab was good... overall 5/10

no hate to either...elevate...

VOTE- EPIC.......................

Voted For: Epic

dog you cant "see" me, like blind men
like nintendo, you bout to meet your end
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Not a strong opener or punch

if your name was Pringles you still couldnt "stack" up to me
herb, you could have over 8,000 post and still have no respect like C.A.L.I.
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What does C.A.L.I have ta do with anything?

your not real, fake ass bitch, I fry fags for fun
vet???,yeah right,your rhymes are more out of date than fucking reruns
you should have known better than to step up to your pimp ho
your biography(profile) is empty like your punchlines, your a fucking "lyrical doe"
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Flow was pretty weak in the first 2 bars, an the punches didnt really connect, they are too played homie..

youll get burned over and over like you was fucking charcol
the only thing thats "Epic" is your number of loses, your whack
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Weak Personal

Its not that hard, come on bitch lets face the fact
I fucking fried you bitch and that is that
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Not even the decency ta have a punch for a closer.....

Ya overrall content in the verse was weak homeboy, no real punches, no real flow, an i wasnt feeling the whole rhyme scheme.....

T, i wasnt feeling your opening 4 lines, didnt really connect...

Closer wasnt up too much, it was okay tho'...

But the walt disney line an Julius line killed the whole battle, ya had alot more creativity in your verse an punches that hit...

You got my vote 4sho, Life, step ya game up kid....

No hate, just telling it like it is

Return the fave

Peace

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This was feedback posted for Life
 

come & holla at me fam & i'll work on ur structure & gettin' u a betta delivery of flows cuz u just stretch ur rhymes in this 1 but it takes time

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This was feedback posted for Epic