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Plutonium 02-12-05 11:04 PM

This was feedback posted for (x) CeEd
 
.................................................. ..............checking polls

(X)eed 02-15-05 12:04 AM

yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo..........................uppin this shit votes will b returnd,,,,,,,,,,,,,

OrEo da cookie 02-15-05 12:22 AM

Voted For: Aurora

im gonna hate to vote for ar. om this one
first off exceed if rap didnt have to rhyme then id give you a kob, half your stuff aint rhyme for real and ar. like one bars of your didnt either
punches, i say these punches were kinda weak but ehh ar took them, you had a good ass opener but your closer aint quit cut it and ex man your opener and closer wasnt very good so of course since ar. had a better opener he takes it,
metas4 didnt realy have any in this battle so couldnt really say
wordplay would go to ex cux he had them but it aint work but at least he had some and ar get some wordplay in thier and make it somethin better to read
multies i dont think they worth putting in a vote but ex you got this just cuz your opener had hella mukties

no hate yall but i give my vote to aurara
ya feel?

Pion 02-15-05 02:16 AM

uppin............................................. ...

Pion 02-15-05 09:57 PM

uppin............................................. ...

(X)eed 02-15-05 10:09 PM

Aiight Uppin This.....................aiight Cmon Kats

(X)eed 02-18-05 09:46 PM

uppin this shyt.............................................

Sik Wit It 02-18-05 10:47 PM

This was feedback posted for Aurora
 
just checking polls

(X)eed 02-19-05 04:34 AM

uppin this cmonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Alien 02-22-05 11:41 PM

Voted For: Aurora

we all connect man...the chance of your konquest is real slim
no he doesn't have any enemy...cause all his friends hate him
don't be messing with me, my defense multiplied as it fortified
see thats why his career never blossom...until it parished & die

VS

beatin me is like Shady wuz witout the Aftermath........Blah
the kid misses "light" and lacks to deliver the Punches

vote Aurora for better punches and more multies and better flow and structure, cause he totally caned this guy... X needs to elevate dramatically...

(X)eed 02-23-05 02:49 AM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^watever........... .........uppin this

(X)eed 03-02-05 04:39 AM

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(X)eed 03-02-05 10:18 PM

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(X)eed 03-05-05 10:08 PM

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High-Dro 03-06-05 03:12 AM

Voted For: Aurora

Aurora - you had a nice flow with some nice personals and punches...my favorite was:
"I think you wack...inspite your amazingly different inner light
I know heads had called you a wit...believe me they're half right!" shit was clever
you had nice vocab too...only thing i can really tell you to work on is throw in a multi maybe...good job, homie

(X)eed - really wasnt feelin it, i couldnt flow wit it at all...i guess i didn't understand sum of ur structure cuz come of ur shit didn't rhyme

IMO Aurora took it easily...keep rhymin...

Return The Favor - Link In My Sig..thanks


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