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nos=not your best but it was intriging non the less....
nice take on the topic, pretty original concept...ya vocab n
imagery was very different from what im used to readin but
it was a good difference...lol...nice work...8.5/10
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hells fire=i wasnt feeling the intro, but i liked alot of individual lines you had n thought ya concept was aight.....not the impacting closer i was expecting...ya flow fell off in some areas n i found some parts highly repetitive n without meaning..but overall it was aight..7/10

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Dope ass battle fellas.

Nos- flow was realllllllly nice with this, flow does matter for topicals. Staying on topic was ok, not as dope as i hoped it would be in that area. But the owrding was right on point so i really liked that. Emotion was noticed it got me to focus on what you was saying, dope shit. 9/10
Hells fire- rhyme scheme was fuckin with me on this. Emotion was dope and that was it as far as being dope. flow was OK but coulda been better in a lot of places. As for staying on topic, it was pretty good, but i didnt think you exactly got to the point? :( 7/10

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Nos-i really thought you took this this is by far my favorite topical you have ever dropped in your entire rv career was deep you painted that picture in my head an you couldnt have done better vocab was good imaginary was very good structure was nice made for easy read this was one of your better peices stay up bro =1=

Hells Fire-your's was alright structure was kinda screwed at times you didnt paint a picture of your story in my head an thats what topicals or any rhyme is about an i wasnt feelin it from you thats why i thought you lost this keep droppin...

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A'ight...in all honesty this battle was pretty one sided...Hells Fire...you need to work on your shit. Your flow was off in places, most of your lines did not rhyme that well...your imagery was decent, your structure was a'ight, you just need to work on some shit...you kept to the topic pretty good, just keep workin at it. Nostradamus...came dope as usual at topicals, nice imagery, dope view on the topic...structure off in places, nice vocabulary...you got this battle with ease. No hate, return the favor...links in my sig.