Voted For: Aurora

i thought that Aurora took this one, even though Aurora's verse wasnt gorgeous, it was still enough to take the win in this situation, good job to the both of you but Aurora had the punches and the flow, and structure and just all of the above to take the win

v/ Aurora

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Voted For: Aurora

genetic engineering won't stimulate u, damn I'll eliminate this twitch
didn't know u have a ghostwriter, I thought u was walking a bitch!
your every single, rhymes are not meaningful, everyone goes LMAO
you're going to need a aspirin...and I thought wackness are painful

vs

Lyrics I recite diminish your inner light makin you lose sight of this microphone fight,
Hoverin over you dark as night I release my might while the pencil lays down to write,

I think Lexikons lines are wayyyyyyyyyy too stretched and needs to levate quite a lot and also Aurora has nicer punches and better rhymes, he has the better flow and structure and everything.

Vote Aurora for a overall better verse

my lines arent stretched if you rap them out you'd see that my multies give the drop flow which continues through out the whole thing and the way i see it your auroras dickrider you voted on both his battles but i don care upin

upin.............................................. .................................................. ..

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Aurora are you still alive you haven't checked in in hella dayz

Voted For: LexiKon

LexiKon
structure is pretty good.. flow is on target.. multis are tight as hell.. you attempted some wordplay.. a few of your punches connected.. no good personals..

Aurora
structure is good.. flow is nice.. you had a few multis.. attempted wordplay, but most of it was either played or just garbage.. almost none of your punches connected.. most your "punchlines" were either just statements or just garbage.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. both had decent wordplay.. neither had good personals.. LexiKon had more multis.. and more connecting punches.. so.. basing off of that.. LexiKon gets my vote..

VOTE - LEXIKON

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Voted For: LexiKon

LexiKon

Lyrics I recite diminish your inner light makin you lose sight of this microphone fight,
Hoverin over you dark as night I release my might while the pencil lays down to write,
This is an easy win like eminem battling bryan mc knight fear is fear but im bringin you fright,
definately feeling the first line, 2nd fell of a little but the 3rd was dope,like the fear-fright thing,nice way to open


Best advice take the next flight tonight to avoid getting destroyed I take away your man hood like a stereoid,
I toyed in your nervous system like Sigmund Freud finding your deepest inner void,
^hehe,good wordplay and stuff,nice creativity as well,liking this


Aurora doesn’t shine bright at this time of day ,

THE CAUSE:

I found the off button on his passive matrix display and pecked at it like a bird at prey,
I’ve stolen his solar energy flipped it on him to be his enemy causing him to look away,
^lmao,shit is making me laugh for sure,love how you describing this so good and dissing him at the same time!


Your skills affected when you least expect it due to leaving them unprotected and injected into an elected subjective,
Used my mirror and reflected his own light leaving him with a crooked linear perspective
^hehe,dope closer for sure!

I love your writing style, something different and nice to read verses like this for a change. Had good hardhitting punches and personals, mad creative as well. Vocab was impressive, had your flow on lock with the multis and internal rhyming (that shit's dope!). Tight drop man!
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Aurora

better be a fast runner, since terminating you gives me no honors
battling me's a big bummer, I can use you as decoy for pig hunters
^okay opener

genetic engineering won't stimulate u, damn I'll eliminate this twitch
didn't know u have a ghostwriter, I thought u was walking a bitch!
^hehe,nice nice,laughed with this one

your every single, rhymes are not meaningful, everyone goes LMAO
you're going to need a aspirin...and I thought wackness are painful
^funny stuff for sure

I'm the one respected well, fail and I bet that you'll be sorry as hell
don't say oh well, it will probably my tax that's paying for your cell!
^okay, nothing too special but decent[/b]

talent...I know you lack this, fact is I'm on your side so respect this
I'll get rid of my positive factors...only if you switch off your wackness
good closer

Okay, you had good punches in there but not really any bold personals. Your vocab was good as well as your structure, was also feeling your flow. Had some multis in there which was a nice add-on. Some of the lines were a bit played but overall you managed to put some creativity in there as well.
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In the end my vote goes to LexiKon because I'm feeling his style a bit more and he had more creativity in his lines...no hate...please RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177089, thanks!

Voted For: LexiKon

punches-lex
persnals-lex
struckture-aur
flow-aur
metals-lex

lex wins this came hard he had punches and persnals aur u had some weakish punches no persnasl that hit flow was ok stuckture was too but no hard punches

Voted For: LexiKon

better be a fast runner, since terminating you gives me no honors
battling me's a big bummer, I can use you as decoy for pig hunters
genetic engineering won't stimulate u, damn I'll eliminate this twitch
didn't know u have a ghostwriter, I thought u was walking a bitch!
your every single, rhymes are not meaningful, everyone goes LMAO
you're going to need a aspirin...and I thought wackness are painful
AURORA I THOUGHT YA VERSE WAS VERY NEAT AND WELL STRUCTURED, THE DISSES WERE OK AND THE PUNCHES WERE A LIL WEAK, OVERALL THOUGH YA VOCAB LACKED AND YOU NEEDED MORE COMPLEXITY TO THE VERSE

I found the off button on his passive matrix display and pecked at it like a bird at prey,
I’ve stolen his solar energy flipped it on him to be his enemy causing him to look away,
Your skills affected when you least expect it due to leaving them unprotected and injected into an elected subjective,
Used my mirror and reflected his own light leaving him with a crooked linear perspective
LEX, YOUR STRUC WASNT AS GREAT BUT IT WAS READABLE, I WAS FEELING THE VOCAB LEVEL AND YA DISSES WERENT GREAT BUT THEY WERE GOOD, JUST AIM FOR MORE PERSONALS NEXT TIME, BUT OVERALL I ENJOYED YOUR VERSE BETTER,
V/LEXICON
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