uppin this bitch............................................. ......................................

This was feedback posted for Os1ris
 

u came harder & i like ur wordplay in this battle if i could vote on this u would win my vote cuz u hit ur opponent wit more of evathang

Uppin this bitch cmon yall vote ......^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: Os1ris

dayum this shit was decent...you have potential to be talented...only thing is...the // at the end of your verse...get rid of that..and try changin font to "arial" and centerin your shit....then you'd get more rezpekt...but you have dope Punches fam..shit was dope

xcell your shit was below average...the flow and structure was WIZACk as fuck.......dawg...you need to up your game on the realz....one

vote: os

Voted For: Os1ris

os1ris took this battle easy......
metas...o
punches/...o multis....none....
flow.....o
vote .....o plz return favor link in sig

uppin this bi ei itch ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: Os1ris

Os1ris i thought your verse was a good . it was a lil stretched and i thought you coulda shortened it up some but over all it was a good verse . you had basic vocab . it was effective though and i thought you really had good personals . my favorite line "I'ma be generic, even though i know against you that it's useless/
Shows that your girls face proves grocery bags have multiple uses//" haha that shit jus cracked me up... the john kerry line was sorta dumb i thought you coulda worded it better.overall alright verse ... nice win


x-cell. you need to elevate some more ou had a nice drop .. watch your spelling .existence.acknowledge and a few other words were spelled wrong. otherwise your punches coulda hit alot harder. and your coulda had some better metaphors. otherwise i jus don't think your on os1ris level. no hate jus elevate

vote//Os1ris