Voted For: lyricalflowz

I'm Punching Throught This Kid's Lyrics As If They Was Water
That Precious Record Of 25-5 Will Soon Be 25 To A Quarter*
^^no this was weak n a trerrible opener
Leave This Cat Beat To Death Like In The House Of Slaughter
He Merk Me?Mexicans Better Of Hoping Bush Open The Border*
^^koo concept, badly worded 2nd line though
His Imagination Is Bigger Then Cartoon Flicks He'll Never Ko Me
Slamming Him Against The Wall Now He Looks Like Wet Balogne
^^very wack..........
To Beat Me This Kid NeedsA Miracle By God Better Get Spritual
His Elevation Is Parallel, So He'll Never Beat Me Doing Lyricals
^^nope.....
He's Illiterate, Told Me To Set Up A Battle, Then Went And Created It
This Kid Wouldn't "Cum" Hard If His Bitch Stripped And He Masterbated
^^this is ther most played concept around...do not use it anymore....
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I'ma Take this cat to the Candy Shop too meet 50
"Bungee jumpin" is the only way you can "hang" wit me
^^eh, ok but weak opener........
You the type that'll talk shit, and then be by my side
Your styles older than the rumours of tupac being alive
^^i liked this its a decent punch..
I see your battles, I skip them, cuz they just bore me
You losing this battle is like your poem; A True Story
^^nicely worded it connected well.....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=176492
You're meant to be broken, so I relate you to a bad rule
you wouldn't be the 'biggest' if you were raps 'capitol'(capital)
^^ok not bad..........
My punches are like leeches with the way they stick
your whack; now theres another "fact for you to establish!"
^^decent closer..
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overall imma vote for lyrical cuz his punches were better..
flow was on point for the most part, 1 personal was decent..
mainly he takes it for a more consistant battle verse....

This was feedback posted for Kester
 

Voted For: lyricalflowz

LF-i was feelin yo drop more...i think u came harder with tha punches and i even seen a couple of metaphores in there, which had me suprised. u came with more creativitie, and originality in yo verse, and thats what made me wunna give u my vote.
Cekret-coo name, but i think u lost this one fam. i think u shouldve came just a lil bit harder, then u wouldve had my vote. ur drop was a lil too boring for me to get into to. but i htink u still came hard wit punches, and good wordplay, just up yo vocab a lil fam...NO hate THO...u haad a nice drop...but LF came harder
overall-keep elevatin yall. this was a close one, but it just gota go to LF...NO HATE...

and plz RTF on battle link in sig against DT..too many good battles gettin slept on...


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