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i forgot about this topical lol @ me topial battling, hmmmmmm
that dont sound right Buck topical battling, future refrence, never do this again Who is jimmy pocketz? an why dont he like me? i am offended now....... |
^That's Troop :)
Why not? You did pretty good in this topical battle man... DQ |
lol Troop?
Shouldda figured by him saying ''Nuff Said'' lol |
This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
Dopeness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
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Voted For: Drama Queen
My vote gose to DQ,.. But Dopeman held his ground he's new to topicals so I felt this was a good battle.. Dopeman,.. Shit man u got loads of potential to be a dope topical head,... I felt your verse had very good flow,. alright vocab at times and deep emotion, I did think it was a bit predictable on the other hand I would read your verse and know how you was going to close the next line. But apart from that it was kool I liked what you did with the topic as well... DQ,.. What can I say,... Flowed really nice as well.. dope vocab and the emotions were gripping,... very well written verse, again used the topic well with some nice hidden complexity. Vote DQ,... But look out for dope in the future. 1~ |
Thanks, i appreciate the feed, i knew i lost this battle when i read her verse, but she is the one of the hottest in topicals right now, so i was happy ta just give it a go, i appreciate the feed an if you drop a link i'll RTF, peace out
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^^Thanks for fully explained vote and yes, he did pretty good in this one...kinda underestimated him *oops*
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Uppity up up!!!.........................
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Uppity up...come on people, vote up :).......
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Voted For: Drama Queen
DQ Nice Verse Girl I Was Feeling This Vocabulary,I Was Feeling The Emotion In This Verse, You Got Talent You Stuck Right To The Topic And Was Constant On Ya Vocabulary, Structure Was Decent I Liked This Drop Girl,The Emotion Structure And Vocab Is What To Look For In Topikals Like This, And You Had All Three Of Em' Buck.Shot Damn Sone Pretty Decent I Aint Know You Was A Topikal Head? Weerd Man You Had Some Decent Vocabulary Here And Emotion, The Structure I Wasn't Digging Though, You Getting Better On Structure, But Ya TOpikal Nice Man Maybe Switch To Topikal?? Who Knows My Vote Goes To DQ Coz Her Emotion Structure And Vocabulary Was There Three Major Parts, No Hate Buck.Shot You Pretty Good At This |
Yeah thanks you little crack whore
Uppin this anyway |
Thanks for the vote, upping this battle for some more!
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upppppppppppppin
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Voted For: Drama Queen
Dope-I think you should work on ya structure. ya structure was off in this one, and a couple other battles i seen you in. but, i was kidna feelin yo verse, but not that much. you stuck to tha topic ight, and u had some creativitie in this one. but i dont think yo drop was hard enough for this one. DQ-i was really feelin yo drop. i think u came more prepared in this one. i seen alot of creativitie outta u in this one, and some coo wordplay. yo structure was better, but i think you should work on puttin more feelin into yo topicals. you WHOLE verse wasnt interesting. some lines were uninteresting to me, but overall, i think you took this. v/DQ- better wordplay, and a better drop from me. i was feelin it more. NO HATE, just what i think. nice drop both yall, and keep elevating. plz RTF on battle link in bottom of sig. ~1~ |
^Thanks for explained vote, favor will be returned as soon as possible...upping for one more...
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