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NoCkTerNuL 02-21-05 11:06 PM

vote vote vote up ya'll!!!!

High-Dro 02-26-05 04:33 PM

Voted For: Solo Creepin

both of y'all came pretty weak...can't even decide who i'd give it to

High-Dro 02-26-05 04:36 PM

solo won jus cuz of the feel/real line from nock...wack...no hate tho...

i think ur vocab could be improved both of ya'll...i think it's the first battle for both of u so i definitely think y'all will elevate...keep workin at it

NoCkTerNuL 03-05-05 04:08 PM

uppin ya'll vote up and close this battle already

NoCkTerNuL 03-05-05 11:25 PM

up up uppin ya'll lets close this already

NoCkTerNuL 03-07-05 10:28 PM

pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Solo Creepin 03-17-05 06:10 PM

uppin............................................. .....................

Also Known. 03-31-05 01:05 AM

Voted For: NoCkTerNuL

both drops were pretty weak nothin special both need to elevate....

But since i gotta vote for someone I'ma vote for Nock... You had 1 line of wordplay which was more than he had so you win that categorie........ Your vocab was pretty basic your end rhymes were nothing difficult but you addressed that this is his first time thats a bonus for you and your closer was better next time add hard punches and some metas


Solo your first line was weak which is not good first always gotta pack a punch..... Good job rhymin his name but you tryed rhymin to hard which killed the line it was forced..... Spell things right in your next battle it makes it look better and also do somethin with your structure like center or bold maybe different font it makes it look like you tryed best lin in your verse was

he thinks he dope cuz he can spell anutha rappers name wrong

would have been better if you didn't misspell another since you are talking about spelling you contradicted yourself.... Good luck to you in the future keep elevatin thats the key.....

V/ Nockternul

Also Known. 03-31-05 01:08 AM

Return the favor on my battle VS. Skriptz honest votes only dont B/S it :thumbup:

Adrenaline 03-31-05 01:00 PM

This was feedback posted for NoCkTerNuL
 
checkin polls...

K.ontroverz.Y 04-14-05 07:16 AM

Voted For: NoCkTerNuL

knock: your punches was straight just need to work on gettin them set up straight...then they'd be fire. your structure is decent, none of your lines were stretched. which was good but you need to have all your lines lined up. that way it looks decent. multi's there was no multi's at all.

Solo: keep elevating you'll get there soon famz. flow was aiight but it would sound better if you had multi's...your structure was ok. accually better then knocks....punches were weak though. none hard hitting.

so overall my vote goes to knock

return the favour in my sig


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