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*Phantom* 03-02-05 04:06 PM

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*Phantom* 03-19-05 03:53 PM

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Adam 03-29-05 08:57 PM

This was feedback posted for CrazyDogg
 
I want to shoot myself in the eyes, and then stab myself in the heart after reading this.

LyricalMa$tamind 03-29-05 10:09 PM

Voted For: Life

unrestricted
IP:


dis "dog" foaming at tha mouth and not cuz hes "crazy"
its cuz he choking on the nut from his gay buddy
your profile for crew says my own, thats out of the norm(normal)
cuz I dont see your crew bitch in the new crews forum
it also says 1/4 black, you need to understand what im bout to say
you are 1/4 nothing bitch, your fucking 100% gay
like a stadium your mother gave me that "dome"
your like repossesion, your used to being "owned"

lotz of good punches
good elevation
like ur word choice
pretty good verse
easy structure
8/10

crazydogg
blahblahblahblahblahblah stop babbling,
You suck so bad, Imma walk away while u battling,
You see how far you've come is just not far enough,
Dude almost 800 posts and u say ur rusty callin ur bluff,
U a liar I know u ain't rusty cuz either u got or u don't and u don't,
U think ur gonna get votes think again, ask ur d/r fans to vote, they won't,
It ain't worth voting on ur sorry @$$, ur worthless, u ain't worthy of this,
It took me 5 minutes to come up wit this and it's a million times betta than ur disses,
This battle was over before it started, I owned you so fast, you never knew i was there,
My rhymes came out so fast u must of been scared, if not, then I think ur mentally impaired!

wow...where do i start
work on ur punches..real weak
structure...ok
only good line was closure
"This battle was over before it started, I owned you so fast, you never knew i was there,
My rhymes came out so fast u must of been scared, if not, then I think ur mentally impaired!"

errthing else wuz wack
no hate i jus think u need 2 elevate more...datz all

my v/unrestricted

please holla back on my battles vs. showtime and thekid523
does battles need votes and ppl aint votin
so plz leave good adequate feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler
holla back!

Germ 03-29-05 10:50 PM

Voted For: Life

uh....yeah, this was easy

crazy dog.....everything was bad, need to get a grip on punches/personals........structure,,,,,,everything, this was pretty bad....elevate.....alot

UR....you get this for actually throwing a punch/personal......could still elevate alot, get more creative with your punches, make things more complex.......elevate vocab and wordplay....but you took this easily

v/unrestricted

DAZZLE 04-01-05 09:36 AM

Voted For: Life

uNRESTRICTED CAME HARDER HERE, BETTER PERSONALS AND PUNCHES,
it also says 1/4 black, you need to understand what im bout to say
you are 1/4 nothing bitch, your fucking 100% gay
THAT WAS YOUR BEST PERSON/PUNCH MADE ME LAUGH.

CRAZY YOU SHIT WAS OK, BUT YOU NEED TO UP YOUR VOCAB AND AIM YOUR DISSES AT THE OPPONENT MORE AND COME UP WITH BETTER PERSONALS.
NO HATE

RETURN THE VOTE PLZ LINK IN SIG

*Phantom* 04-06-05 10:55 AM

uppin............................................. ......

Verbal 04-19-05 05:23 PM

Voted For: Life

blahblahblahblahblahblah stop babbling,
You suck so bad, Imma walk away while u battling,
Filler. Wack.
You see how far you've come is just not far enough,
Dude almost 800 posts and u say ur rusty callin ur bluff,
Eh...
U a liar I know u ain't rusty cuz either u got or u don't and u don't,
U think ur gonna get votes think again, ask ur d/r fans to vote, they won't,
Terrible, no flow.
It ain't worth voting on ur sorry @$$, ur worthless, u ain't worthy of this,
It took me 5 minutes to come up wit this and it's a million times betta than ur disses,
No, it's not.
This battle was over before it started, I owned you so fast, you never knew i was there,
My rhymes came out so fast u must of been scared, if not, then I think ur mentally impaired!
Played, weak, wack, etc.


dis "dog" foaming at tha mouth and not cuz hes "crazy"
its cuz he choking on the nut from his gay buddy
Still looking for a rhyme....
your profile for crew says my own, thats out of the norm(normal)
cuz I dont see your crew bitch in the new crews forum
OK, sadly enough this might win the battle..
it also says 1/4 black, you need to understand what im bout to say
you are 1/4 nothing bitch, your fucking 100% gay
Played, wack...
like a stadium your mother gave me that "dome"
your like repossesion, your used to being "owned"
OK

Vote- Life...crazy dogg blew like old man winter....no flow, no punches, no nothing

Daubs 04-24-05 04:45 AM

Voted For: Life

ughhhhhh... 1 sided battle, Unrestricted took this, i think its obvious why.
Crazy your shit was forced, structure was off and no hard hitting punces.

it also says 1/4 black, you need to understand what im bout to say
you are 1/4 nothing bitch, your fucking 100% gay

^ that owned your whole verse.
no hate, just elevate. RTF links in sig.


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