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Ryan Hughes 03-08-05 01:58 PM

Voted For: .:BlazE:.

V/Blaze this was a close battle but he gets my vote he had some good punchs an structure an he had personals wit some multis..supa u had a good verse to but u lacked consistent punchs an vocab i've seen better from u....no hate good battle to both..RETURN THE FAVOR.
opner=Supa
closer=blaze
structure=tie
punchs=blaze
multis=blaze
personals=tie
overall=Blaze

Adam 03-09-05 05:31 PM

This was feedback posted for supamann
 
supamann took this one.......blaze has dickriders though so i doubt he will win........

Master Minded 03-09-05 05:31 PM

Voted For: supamann

WTF IS THIS BULLSHIT!!! omfg, I hate FL supamann you straight killed this kid, iunno how you down 4-0 it's fucking amazing, you killed it, Blaze you vocabulary was fucked, you spelt all your shit wrong and it was hard to read, and you dropped like 0 punches, al wack, no personels, sup, no personels either, but dope punches and multi's good flow, def better structure and vocab, you took this no doubt

Grave Digger 03-10-05 03:13 PM

This was feedback posted for supamann
 
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MaRVJay 03-10-05 03:45 PM

Voted For: supamann

first off be4 i vote whyte out y do u have my title??..im amerikaz nightmare...but neway

whyteout:
U would be Phat even if u was Russel, U fuckin wit a Grand Hustla,
Dawg u wack as hell, If i knew dis i wouldnt have fucked wit ya
^^^^^first line was okay...BUT GRAND HUSTLE & FUCKED WIT YA....DO NOT RYHME..SO DAT WAS A WEAK OPENER

I have been threw many of hard Obstacles, but u an easy object,
Throwin punches da connect, aint gonna help u here ill jus retaliate and reject
^^^MULTI BARLEY RYHMED...ANOTHER WEAK LINE
U gonna regret dat acception, u r better off as a no show,
Aint nobody can stop my flow, Ill put so much presure on ur verse it will start to bow
^^^LMAOOO AWW MAN...NO SHOW & BOW...DO NOT RYHME
Add Supamann to my Merked List, how u gonna throw punches u cant move ur fist,
Cuzz i spit rain dis kat jus spits mist, damn shame threw all those punches and missed
^^^^BEST LINE U HAD RITE HERE

OKAY...OVERALL I THINK YA VERSE WAS WACK U DONT KNOW HOW DA PUT WORDS 2GETHA...U HAD NO PERSONALS NO PUNCHLINES AND NO CREATIVITY..WORK ON DAT FAM

supamann:
Its now time ta show you all my verbal abilities
Im here ya ta prove ya faker than Mili Vanili g
^^GOOD OPENER..KIND OF PLAYED BUT IT A WORK
Wait skip the g, ya faker than pamela andersons titties
Talk on me, I leave ya with nine holes like fiddy
^^^DECENT BAR...YA FLOW WAS OF THO
U or ya mama fa havin u, which 1 is tha dumber fuck
Ya lines r weaker than steve erkels left uppercut
^^^NO
I will have ya chopped up, hidden in my attick
Know that my words have you shaken like a crack addict
^^OKAY
Eruptin like earthquakes, fuckin wit me is a mistake
Fuck with me, I throw ya body in tha nearest lake
^^^2 BASIC

OVERALL...YA VERSE WAS REAL BASIC..U TRIED DA BE CLEVA BUT IT WASN'T WORKIN AT LEAST YA WORDS RYHMED..I HAVE DA SAY YA VERSE WAS BETTA THAN WHYTE OUT'S THO..

RETURN DA FAVOR LINK IN SIG

Critic 03-18-05 08:52 AM

Voted For: .:BlazE:.

Alright wasn't really a good battle at all didn't see
any real punches,.. both had weak struc's no
complexitiy no nothing to be fair...

Both need to elevate alot up your game up.

Vote ~ Kam coz he had the better verse just needs
to get his txt to the next level...

Good luck both

Vote ~ Kamik


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