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intensify effect 02-18-05 07:53 AM


drop a link with-in 24 hours or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170910

Dirty Nigga 02-18-05 08:12 AM

Links of what?????????

intensify effect 02-18-05 08:15 AM

u need to drop a link with proper feed back....

u must always drop proper feed back on someone else OPEN MIC befor u can open u'r own.....

and when u do open ya own u must drop the link where u gave someone else PROPER FEED BACK....

when i get active i try to enforce it....

u aint have no link....

so u must drop one....



drop a link with-in 24 hours or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170910

Dirty Nigga 02-18-05 08:42 AM

lol, aight, but couldnt you just check out NOK Yaself out, By J-DOT, I droppd proper feed on that, an he returned the favor......

lil jj_1 02-18-05 09:42 AM

ey yo dis wast tight you stayed on topic, good flow,
good structa and wordplay.dis was hott keep doin ya thing man
9.5/10

Dirty Nigga 02-18-05 10:10 AM

Appreciated homie.....

Uppin for some moe feed all

Dirty Nigga 02-18-05 05:10 PM

Uppin...........

Dirty Nigga 02-19-05 03:37 PM

Uppin..........

C.March 02-19-05 07:04 PM

I liked the flow to it.. but the structure was kinda off.. overall u had some nice lines in there.. some weak ones.. just work on the structure even though it doesnt really matter toooo much if you think about it...

anyways 7/10 bro..

Dirty Nigga 02-19-05 07:10 PM

Appreciated....

But JUST YESTERDAY, I think i finally got the hang of the structure thing, but the feed is HIGHLY APPRECIATED, Thank you again...

Uppin people...

Dirty Nigga 02-20-05 11:18 AM

Uppin...............

Jay-SmileZ 02-20-05 01:21 PM

good multis...stayed on topic well...flow could have been better..second verse was better then the first verse,,,the first verse started too simple an the multis sounded forced...but second verse was proper

TearZ oF BlaQ 02-20-05 01:47 PM

this wouldve been better heard audio... but on text this wasnt to great of a read .. flow was on point... stay up

Dirty Nigga 02-20-05 01:49 PM

Appreciated y'all

Drop a link an ill RTF

Peace

Dirty Nigga 02-21-05 08:16 AM

Uppin

Leave a link an i'll RTF

Peace


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