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drop a link with-in 24 hours or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170910 |
Links of what?????????
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u need to drop a link with proper feed back....
u must always drop proper feed back on someone else OPEN MIC befor u can open u'r own..... and when u do open ya own u must drop the link where u gave someone else PROPER FEED BACK.... when i get active i try to enforce it.... u aint have no link.... so u must drop one.... drop a link with-in 24 hours or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170910 |
lol, aight, but couldnt you just check out NOK Yaself out, By J-DOT, I droppd proper feed on that, an he returned the favor......
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ey yo dis wast tight you stayed on topic, good flow,
good structa and wordplay.dis was hott keep doin ya thing man 9.5/10 |
Appreciated homie.....
Uppin for some moe feed all |
Uppin...........
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Uppin..........
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I liked the flow to it.. but the structure was kinda off.. overall u had some nice lines in there.. some weak ones.. just work on the structure even though it doesnt really matter toooo much if you think about it...
anyways 7/10 bro.. |
Appreciated....
But JUST YESTERDAY, I think i finally got the hang of the structure thing, but the feed is HIGHLY APPRECIATED, Thank you again... Uppin people... |
Uppin...............
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good multis...stayed on topic well...flow could have been better..second verse was better then the first verse,,,the first verse started too simple an the multis sounded forced...but second verse was proper
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this wouldve been better heard audio... but on text this wasnt to great of a read .. flow was on point... stay up
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Appreciated y'all
Drop a link an ill RTF Peace |
Uppin
Leave a link an i'll RTF Peace |
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