Voted For: Limited Edition

indeph- good:liked the way it related to the topic, liked the ending, okay voacabulary
bad: a few lines were strecthed, didnt like the rhyme scheme, couldve had better wordchoice for a lot of lines, a lot of words were repeated and didnte seem like it wwas for a particular meaning (like some pieces)

LE- good: nice for a short piece, liked the repetitiveness, felt like it was there for an actual reason, also related to the topic in a nice way, good ending
bad: couldve had a way better vocabulary, couldve stayed on topic a lil more, couldve expressed your thoughts a lil more detailed

both- good battle, gonna be close

overall-

vocab- indeph
ending- tie
worchoice-LE
styed on topic- indeph
flow/structure-LE

v/LE

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Voted For: Indeph

Indeph Verse Seemd More Deeper Then Limted Editions It Was Very Imaginative Your Verse Was A Little Stretched In Some Parts Seemed More Like A Poem To Me,Each Line Went Well With The Next Line So It Was Easy To Relate To Each Line That You Made

Limited Your Verse Was Decent To Didn't Seem Like You Put A Lot Of Emotion In Your Verse It Was Well Balanced And Each Line Followed The Other That's A Good Thing.But Since You Didn't Put More Emotion In It I Think Indeph Won This.

/v Indeph Return The Favor

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Voted For: Indeph

Pretty decent battle here…

L.E. – you had a nice story there, good use of vocabulary, the flow was okay in there,
Structure was in place, like usual; practically your story had a little emotion up in there
Not as good as you’re other topical battles though, but pretty decent from you here…

Indeph – you also had a nice story too, the flow here was a little off & on, the structure
Was a little stretchy but it was in good use, your vocabulary was good too, & the emotion
Was good too, I thought you came weak here too, not as good as your other topical battles,
But good enough though…

Overall – both of you had good topical-verses but I think that Indeph came a little better in
This topical battle though, no hate to both though…