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ummm they are dots.
*pulls the dot key out of his keyboard* happy? |
Voted For: intensify effect
[i][color=blue] punches-I.E multi's-none wordplay-I.E creativity-I.E structure-I.E overall I.E gets my vote simply because he just came hard in this battle, his punches were nice, wordplay was there, etc..Durban's verse wasn't bad but i thought it could have been better, he had some aight shit but nothin that really caught my eye...... V/Intensify Effect Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Durban
Checkin the polls an uppin this shit famlay
Decent drop.... Good luck Both y'all |
stop deleting votes prick like it aint bad enough we bearly get votes......
upp'in........................................ ^^^ and that is my shit........ |
upping..... both votes were unexplaind bitch! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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This was feedback posted for Durban
checking polls......................................
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
ayyo I.E. ya verse was tighter than Durbans Pussy!! haha you took this one playa.. peaCe
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upp'in this joint.........................................
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
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This was feedback posted for Durban
checkin da pollz...........................................
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upping........
lmao@thasickones comment....his verse tighter than a virgins pussy........... you assholes as loose as blah from ryding his dick fag bwoy!! |
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checkin polls.....i'd prolly beat you both in a topical......but good verse and approach for the both of you tho.......:thumbup:
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man why do ya fucking check polls.....
imma ask strobe to bannd check'in polls and only vote if u wanna see whos up..... |
Voted For: intensify effect
I.E. Nice Verse Man, This Was Your First Pretty Good Imagery, Nice Vocabulary Up In Here, Structure Could Use Work Man Weerd But Opener Was Nice, So Was The Closer, Overall If This Really Was Your First Then You'll Be Dope In No Time, Just Try And Fix Your Structure, And Shit Man Nice Durban Good Verse Man, You Had ALot Of Imagery In Here, Structure Was Good That's Pretty Good Man, Vocabulary Eh! No Man Try And Fix That Shit Up Man Nicely Done Yo, All You Didn't Have here Was Vocabulary You Lacked Alot Man So My Advice Is up On That Vote-I.E. Return The Favor In My Sig Preferebly Me Vs .K.onfliktz |
Voted For: intensify effect
D this verse was good, vocab was nice good choise of words vision was there, felt what u was saying u had a few celever lines and got the point across nicely good tight verse Seven angels burning as they fall,simply unspoken Thier harps silent and unused,simply just broken Heavens ingulfed in flames,holy churches tumbling down As The Throne of god Is usurped by death's crown No such thing as judgment day,its now been denied All unworthy of the dark shall perish,its impossible to hide Desolate eyes ascend In hate,all evil starts to show the white light is now black,and the red starts to glow Humans falling into the depths below,no reason to fight Shadowed by dark clouds,no rememberance of light As people start to bask and glorify the heat of hell We turn into weeping mortals that will forever dwell Our souls shall never rest,but be forever serving the devil endliss torment awaits,death seems paused never to prevail as demons rip into your flesh,to expose your inner self you relise you should of praised god,and he would of delivered your wealth shit was tight 8/10 intensify effect ya verse was good, i thought u had more celever lines ya vocab was good, vision was there the emtion of fire was there i thought this was a hot verse man ya 2 was went at this good then i notice intensify say D pre-write this which is lame and if it tookhim 1 hour thats tight eternal damnation Pain inflicted through emotions given... Soul is positioned to scream though my throat is missin *wah*... Envision a mind vs a talent.. in a voice box entrenched in a vine... Then u will find a dilemma just as simple as mine... insight like a blind monk, word patterns wanderin' the mountainsides... cuz with all my reason and truth, even i lose my footing at times.. I suffer cuz I favor verbs and fatal words... But vocally my cords are stressed more than laid off laborers... wont stop till im niled-to-da-curv, feels like hitler soul grabb'in-me... rapedly making ya dicks drop to the floor like u was being SUCKED by gravity... u would think guns, knifes and accidents causes casualties... but these forces beyond what we all have been practicing... witch craft, voo-doo, with bones gift-raped... what a tragedy... pop'ed opticals for trash reading of ya topicals..slugs u had to see.. BITCH!, claps when i strut through the door gashes bust through my pores... The Face of Durban Slapped to the Cutting room Floor... coward is taimed, but my enternal feelings are killing me... skin peeling from the sins in me frightning lighning reeling on agility... on the heels of achilles as my pride bested my think modes... i can conquer all of rap N still wont think smooth... till aint no-one left to be next to lose, i feel there still complication... and this my 1st topical drop, imagen what i have instored befor my enternal damnation......... BITCH... i was feeling the ending shit was all around tight 9/10 |
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