i like the switch in beats...ur voice is fine...flow is talky, not really flowing


decent lyrics


not bad


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^^word. Thanks for the feedback.

/\/\ word, dont think that goes un-noticed, you really impress me w/ ur feedback no matter what I think bout ur audio... just wanted to say that.

ok... Listenin to the top track on the page since nothing said 2 for 1.....

iight listenin while typin

when you first come on... and you throw that pause into ur verse... not feelin it dog, it sounds off... verse gets more consistent, quality is great on my shit speakers :thumbup: - about half way through ur verse goes from being a little bit choppy, to smooth as hell- i dunno man, warm up more before u record cuz if the whole first joint sounded like it did towards the end, it would have been real hot fiya like dave chappele skits... ( when you switched up diddick nore style, classic line)

2nd joint jumps in....

arright, flow is fluid from start to finish here, I'm borderline on ur style of delivery its real stop and go, i like it but I think it would be alot more entertaining if used in conjunction w/ a switch up here and there- lyrically your straight, production wise straight- just keep droppin them tracks, and that detailed feedback that makes kids cry....1

^Thanks for the feed and thanks for taking notice man. Means a lot.

I def agree, my flow in the first little verse is different than the second one on the same beat (the flow AND deliv on all these verses is different). I shoulda spent more time on that first bit. As far as that second verse - you're right. My flow generally is 'chunky' or 'stop and go' as you reffered to it but yeah, some flow-flippin def wouldn't hurt. I'll try that on the next track. Good looks on the honest feed man. 1

Oh and I'll keep laying the feed down. Just tellin it liek it is, but if they gotta cry, then let em cry!! lol 1