but i know what people like on this site and its not my stufff, lol

Voted For: Wet Willy

v/ wet willy....
good battle on both sides....
i was feelin both pieces....
but i have to go wit willy a bit more....
i liked his piece overall more than i did, onestep's...
it seemed to me like he had more emotion, as well as more imagery....
ya'll both had nice flow for the most part as well....
its just that willy takes it in jus about every category...
thats why he gets the vote...

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Voted For: Wet Willy

Wet Willy: the strongest aspect of your drop was the emotion for sure, so raw and real as if it was written straight from the core. Your sentences had good length, not stretched at all and the structure was perfect which made it easier to read. Kept your vocab quite simple but I like that because your attention remained on the emotional aspect.Not too much imagery and approach wasn't that original but this drop was so real,enjoyed reading it!

OneStepBeyond: the strongest thing of your piece was the creative approach, quite obvious I guess. Liked how you viewed it from the angle of a therapist observing the entire situation but it's hard to get some raw emotion in there then.The structure is good and I like how the story progressed, vocab was nice and flow was okay. Rhymes didn't work too well here and there and emotion was lacking due to your approach of the topic but nice creativity so gotta give you props for that!

My vote goes to Wet Willy because of the great emotion in his drop but props to OneStepBeyond for his creative approach! Please return the favor (link's in my sig)

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Voted For: Wet Willy

yo this was nice battle, but I think wet took it.

One, your verse was kinda nice. A little too long tho, but it was still a nice read. Good imagery and such. I think you jus need to work on yo flow tho. It kinda went off in some places.
But overall pretty nice piece, yo.

Wet, you had a pretty tight verse. I was likin' it. It had me thinkin' yo. Your flow was on for whole verse too. Really never went off. I was liking it. Your imagery and such was nice too. This was a pretty dope read.

but overall nice battle, I jus tyhink that Wet took it. pc yo

i don't think he should be beatin em this bad but whatever

lol this is funny, and by funny i mean not at all...

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

um this shit was mad hot.. both of yall came pretty hard and i was feelin both verses alot.
but i liked onesteps creativity more. he also had great flow and better vocab.
wet willy had real good emotion and structure but onestep had that creative angle on the approach to the topic yall was doin n thats what edged it out for me, nah mean
good battle
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uppin lemme get this win lmao.....................

atleast it wasn't a k.o... i still ain't feelin all those votes though, i ain't the one to dq though

^^^ its straight. win or lose.. this was still a tight battle..

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