Voted For: Skriptz

LyricalFlowz
hmm not bad i seen some ncie lines at most parts but you didnt really use any metas to complete your personals well i didnt see them maybe if you did try making it more obvious cause you probably used hard words that didnt quite work but other den the lack of metas the verse was not that bad the rest was ight
no hate

Skriptz
i liked the way you used lots of metaphores in there and created tight punches with a few personals but there wasnt much comedy in there but it wasnt bad the stucture was decent and the flow was great but what most stood out were the punches probably peace

opener: skriptz
closer: lyrical
punches: skriptz
personals: skriptz
stucture: tie
flow: tie

vote/ Skriptz

aight...uppin this

Voted For: Skriptz

gotta go with skriptz

lyricalflowz....alot of played shit in there, like your closer, the 'bigger than you line', boxing gloves one.... weak pucnhes too...like the tool shed one and even the opener was a little dull....overall, not bad of a spit, but you need to come out harder against he's skriptz, more creativity and complexity, better thought out lines....flow didnt go so smoothly throughout your verse...and you could up the vocab a little

skriptz....took this one all the way, little sloppy on the flow i thought near the start, but thats about it, nice punches, opener and the ash tray ones were the best....so overall: better punches, couple harder personals and complexity...

v/skriptz