That was a cold beat kinda played but ya kno, but like the guy said you need to get a better mic. Do that and then we will be able to really hear what you are saying. The sound quality sucked

flow was aight on this beat...lyrics were not bad...i think the delivery could be upped a lil more dont sound to confident...have a old school feel to it...wasn't feeling the echo effect...overall for a first joint its not a bad track...keep doing ya thing aight...

lol, thanx fo tha feed yall. and yeah, ima try n git a better mic. and Tmka"D", it sounds a bajillion times betta wif tha echo than wut it did b4 i put tha echo in. lmao @ Ministry, lol, werd

basically fam....keep doin your thing props

The beat is dope ....ITS FUNKY ITS FUNKY

wird....but yo

dont do echos....and shit.....just keep your voice how it is..it would be mad beter

kinda short but nice.......lyrics was str8t.....kinda off beat in some spots.....but good......
PLEASE drop feedback on any one of my tracks...thanks

i wasn't feelin the beat, but thats cause im a producer..................flow was good, but you seemed to lose your wording sometimes. other then that it was on, from what I could hear. i understand that your mic was from a ps2 so its kool. The lyrics had potential though.

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