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Kordozar 02-24-05 06:09 PM

This was feedback posted for Blac-Out
 
Polls.........................

godfather 02-24-05 08:02 PM

Voted For: MC IgGY

i think mc iggy won because he had good vocab
really hard hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
blac-out u had good structure
u need a lil work on ur vocab
u had a pretty good opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were tight

favorite iggy lines:
This fool is iron and im air cuz he gettin rusty
this wasnt a battle all u did was make my shoulders get dusty
this fool couldnt be hot if his last name was stove
im a eagle, this lil kid is a baby dove

favorite blac-out lines:
Listen to me, dis niggas a fuckin amateur//
I got da hammer tucked, step to Blac-out, then Ima damage ya//
Rv'll just laugh at ya, the way you gotta knock-out//
You beatin me? That’s like, Not seein a new cd of 2pac out//
So chill, your battle record of wins getting to 10-is-rarely//
Hey Strobe!!!! Dig up a whole, add this nigga to RV's Cemetery//

return the favor
link in sig thx

RiDiKiLLoZ 02-24-05 08:43 PM

This was feedback posted for Blac-Out
 
STYLE:
props to blac-out... 1 of the better drops ive seen on this site since ive been here. "snow in the flurry"? i didnt know that was hard at all.

PUNCH:
most lines were hittin on pointe for Blac-Out, u gota watch out tho man, MC IgGY is stiLL snowing on u...

FLOW:
awesome job by Blac-Out
awesome job by MC IgGY makin it obvious that there was an awesome job by Blac-Out

TECHNIQUE:
Blac got up and personal at times, the Pac line is tight,
"against me you require a higher level of writing"?
"rusty and dusty"? MC ur rhymes were predictable, and that only means taht people have seen the words too many times together, freshen em up a bit. n by the way, stove n dove end in the same 3 letters, but they sound distinctly different, "oh" and "uff" respectively. ur last 2 lines seemed like a late attempt to rhyme for the last time, didnt quite do it for me.

S: Blac-Out > MC IgGY
P: Blac-Out > MC IgGY
F: Blac-Out > MC IgGY
T: Blac-Out > MC IgGY
OVERALL: Blac-Out > MC IgGY, MC u got some good shit, but need more time spent working on puttin it all together
VOTE: cant yet again, but obvious whos got my vote

MC IgGY 02-27-05 02:14 PM

umm ok, uppin for more votes people
comon ima return da favor

Young Montana 02-27-05 02:23 PM

Why cant u vote Ridikilloz?????????????Uppin...........

MC IgGY 03-06-05 12:48 AM

uppin for some more explained votes
comon yallllll

MC IgGY 03-18-05 12:19 AM

uppin for more votes
comon yall dont sleep on this

Meta4 03-18-05 12:57 AM

This was feedback posted for Blac-Out
 
checkin polls aight battle could've been betta

A_M_H 03-19-05 11:42 AM

Voted For: MC IgGY

Mc Iggy- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........

Blac-Out- your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10.......

V/ Mc Iggy
make sure 2 return the favor

Also Known. 03-19-05 01:42 PM

Voted For: MC IgGY

eh this battle was ok bad structure from both re-think it blac out was just talkin about guns thats thinkin inside the box you need to connect wth punches since you live far appart from each other you aint gone hit em with bullets yea mc iggy had better everything my fav line was

blac the buster aint seen these keys like he was Ray Charles

v/mc iggy

return the fav link in sig


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