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Dirty Nigga 02-19-05 06:54 PM

No offence ta J-Dot, cause i dont have nothin against him, but the whole rhyme scheme was way too basic, an i expected alot more, if it wasnt for the few personals he had, i'd say it was a newbie verse

Thats no hate J-Dot, i just saw alot better from you man

Bangalore 02-19-05 07:21 PM

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 
jdot-i'll have to go with you on this one. i thought your vocab was alot better. and that your rhymes and flow were very structured and put together. you kept up the attack the whole way through and played off his name i liked the line "Hocus pocus, look, Sovereigns back one more time" it made me laugh but yea you had good punches through out the whole thing

class.sic
i guess i was expectin a lil something more than what you dropped. your whole structure was off. alright punches sorta middle schoolish though but no hate you kept it st8 through your battle but j-dot jus had ups on you on this one

vote//jdot

Class.Sic 02-19-05 07:25 PM

lol...vocab....hahahaha your hella dumb...ok ok ok...point out some words in his verse that made you go to the dictionary....lol

Class.Sic 02-19-05 08:18 PM

aiight uppin for votes............................

Kordozar 02-19-05 08:36 PM

Voted For: Class.Sic



Openor=J-Dot Had Multies And Punch
Multies=J-Dot^^^ Explains It
Personals=Tie Both Ok Multies
Strukture=J-Dot,Class Wass Stretched
Punches=Tie,Both Had Decent Punches
Vokab=None
Closer=Tie Ok Closer Fa Yall...

J-Dot Came Harder In Thiss Cus He Had Better Punches And He Had Some Ok Multies/Personals All In 1 Bar..

/V J-Dot Rtf.................


Vote switched

Class.Sic 02-20-05 06:44 PM

Uppin for votes...................................

M-Eazy 02-20-05 07:38 PM

^well, im up 2-1, once that vote gets switched...good look on all tha feed, and tha votes...RTF will be comin soon

Class.Sic 02-21-05 12:44 AM

Uppin for votes...................................

Status 02-21-05 03:33 AM

yo this was no D.R J dot came mad beter
plus this CLASS SIC nigga is wack....plus a biter...plyus j dot had way better structure
and that is where he one in my opinion....

uppin this shit for you guys

Class.Sic 02-21-05 11:07 AM

uppin 4 votes...................................only reason im losing is coz of my structure...

Red Stroke 02-21-05 02:54 PM

Voted For: Class.Sic


Class
Alright You Had A Decent Verse, I See Alot Of Personals in Here Some Good And Some Alright, Vocabulary Was Nice, One Thing Is Your Structure Needs Work, You Had Some Decent Punches Here, Some Multi's Not To Much But SOme Was There, Towards The Eding It Got Better, Which I Find Good But It Usualy Starts Of Good Ends Bad, Anyway, You Had A Nice Flow I'll Give This Verse A 9/10

J Dot
Alright You Had An Alright Structure But You Had Whack Vocabulary Some Basic Ish, You Need To Change That, Also You Need To Put Meta's In Here, Coz Your Killing Your Own Flow, It Wasn't All That For Serious, It Was Decent Though,
Personals You Didn't Have To Much Of It Which Ate Your Flow, Also Your Punches I Didn't Feel Hard, I Feel Like I Heard This Before but I'm Not Sure, Anyways You Get An 8.2/10

No Hate
Vote=Class

Pounds 02-21-05 02:56 PM

This was feedback posted for Class.Sic
 
Polls,elivate yall 2 both verses were laking real punches

Daubs 02-21-05 03:45 PM

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 
u deff got this, but i fort class was nok aswel? anyway nice drop.

M-Eazy 02-21-05 08:25 PM

wow...uppin this battle? dude is wack.......................

Blackmage 02-21-05 09:22 PM

Voted For: Class.Sic

Class.Sic takes this one but this was a close battle

U a bitch, u kno it, I kno it, now RV gon’ kno it
U on that hoe shit, 4 real, now its time to expose it
THERE'S NO PUNCH HERE
Aint no need to spit back, I already merked u once
When u were ‘Lyrical Havok’, now ima serve u son
NICE PERSONAL BUT THERE WAS NO PUNCH
While u switchin yo names, u shuld be focused on rhymes
Hocus pocus, look, Sovereigns back one more time
ONCE AGAIN NICE PERSONAL DECENT PUNCH
We all kno this is yo life, and u still come up shorter than elfs
...u leave, just to come back and introduce yoself
NICE PERSONAL GOOD LINE
U rap skill less…. rather brainless, u just a lame
U wuna clap at JDOT….nigga say my name
NO PUNCH JUST AN INSULTING SET UP THAT WASN'T CREATIVE
…..Da beef done arose, now its time to attack
‘Establish’ hot barz from Dot, but please, stay to tha back
DIDN'T SEE THE PUNCH NICE WORDPLAY WITH ESTABLISHMENT
tha end is near, time to expose u clearly
put a microphone in yo head and u still wouldnt hear me
OK PUNCH OK CLOSER

it seems to me you got so caught up in having beaten him before that you filled your verses with that and forgot the punches and metaphores

Put this king in the ring, dont expect any punches...
Not swing or a fling, from any of his newb bunches...
DECENT LINE WEAK PUNCH
At ease, ill NOK his eyes out till he look Chinese...
Have ya ma askin "Can I see your Green Card Please"...
ONCE AGAIN DECENT LINE WITH A WEAK PUNCH
Dark Ass Cat, from the dwellings beneath my Charles Scwab... *
When you at BAT, it aint the plate, but askin for the MANs Job...*
DECENT PUNCH OK LINE
Know whats hopeless, your dopeless, your lifeline is comin up ropeless...
Kid like Bush, runnin his country into the ground and sayin "Were makin pro-gress"...
THIS WAS A GOOD LINE WITH A NICE PUNCH, BUT PRO-GRESS IS PUSHING IT
Only came coz the best left his crew, place i didnt want to inhibit...
but do me a favor and dust off your ankles like a museam exhibit...
BAD PERSONAL OK PUNCH

It seems to me that j dot did more bragging about beating classic then he did punching. Maybe i missed something but this is my vote no hate to anyone.


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