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Voted For: Indeph
Basically i'm going to keep this simple because this was VERY one-sided... Indeph you lyrically murdered Rising Sun...you showed some good flow and had many punches closer good opener good line about medal of honour dope wordplay...also flow and structure on point very decently layed out verse...too easy. Rising Sun you been here for a year...the way that verse was layed out was poor at best...punches when there was one was played rhyming scheme was wack...basically dawg you need to keep improving because despite your time here...your not at the level i think you'd like to be...go back to FL and work on ya skills there for a while then make a return and prove us all wrong... V/Indeph...3 days for RTF...(Start: 5/3/05 End: 8/3/05) Or ima remove this vote |
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Voted For: Indeph
aight, shit was close.... Rising: ya had some real hard hittin punches, strcuture was all over the place, that could be a fault i suppose, but my structure is fucked too, so yeah, but ya had some decent stuff, few lines were just not very nice tho...that prince william line wasnt up ta much, wasnt feelin the closer on the whole, ya structure an flow was real off in this battle, it was hard ta keep up with the flow in my opinnon, creative in lines, but you just wasnt consistant, seemed like there was too many fillers Indeph: sick stuff, opener wasnt all that much, the mdeal of honor line was the highlight of this battle, nice wordplay off the name an used it as a punch/personal too, that defines battle rap right there, that line had everythin in my opinnon flow was right on point throughout, much more consistant verse, closer was nice too, flow wasnt there for the opener, but i was feelin the idea, nice stuff indeph you got my vote RTF With an honest vote in my battle with Black Queen, or any other battles ya see floating around Peace out |
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