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Voted For: Linguistics
Ling Alright You Had A Decent Verse Here, But I Don't Think Your A Vet, You Seem Like You Got Potent You Had Some Decent Punches, And Some Decent Personals, You Could Fiz The Structure Up A Little, But Other Then That, 8/10 Es Okay Your Verse Was Just Plain Out Whacked Kid, You Need To Elevate On Structure Personals And Punches Coz They Just Wasn't There, Also Throw In Some Multi's That'll Help Alot Read Some Battler Overall 5/10 Return The Favor |
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Voted For: Linguistics
Linguistics structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. most of your punches connected.. you had pretty nice personals as well.. Es`An`Ef structure is good.. flow is pretty nice.. no multis.. most of your wordplay was complete garbage.. none of your punches connected.. you attempted personals, but they came out like ass.. Overall both had a good structure and flow.. neither had multis.. Linguistics had better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. Linguistics gets my vote in a landslide.. VOTE - LINGUISTICS Please hit up the link in my sig.. |
Voted For: Linguistics
linguistics~nice opener, your flow in this verse was good to read, nice wordplay here, good usage of personals on his name, i like the linguistics bar you used, nice,lol...overall good verse, you stayed on point straight thru and didnt fall off...good job.1 e's an ef~ok, you had a decent line here or there, but you failed to prove anything you were saying, you could have used links, or made even more punches out of your personals with better wordplay, nothing really stuck too far out tho for me, you seemed to use some filler and your structure was off in parts, no hate at all, just work on elevating, overall good job both, your verse just wasnt enough to beat your opponent..1 |
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