I personally think thats nice, work on your vocab a bit, otherwise I'm really feeling that deep shit...........overall you have nice flow, I like it. 8/10

^^^thanx 3rd...mos def uppin dis track

uppin bitches!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this was great 2 read i almost got teary readin it......man it'z hot in here lol j/k but naw it touch my heart bout ur son b'in sick & ur girl i feel ya on this 10/10

^^^thanx alot homie...mos def uppin dis

emotion!!!

This is dope. You expreesed alot of perssonal shit in this. Rhymes are solid.flow is good yet off in a few spots due to a couple of stretched lines.

Dope drop.keep em coming

iight...mos def...uppin again

aint nobody doin OM like NOK...fuck, man , i gota drop one...NOK is tha shit. this just made a thousand times more confident about NOK...we tha hottest crew droppin OM's out right now...i was feelin this shit. deep shit fam. i never knew u had a son. much respect dawg. this shit was coo....*and i sense someone elevating*...lol...nah, but this shit was flawless to me, no doubt. tha flow was on point. u stayed on topic, and u hit this shit like its posed to go...word...keep doin ya shit, and keep elevating...NOK you other bitches...

and we just got buck...man, we dope as hell...

NOK

~1~

damn...we got buck?...oh shit, NOBODY CAN FUCK WIT US EVA...swiftly uppin and check out my new shit...its a diss to BLACK...tha first link in sig niggaz...~1~

that shit is deep bro hope ya get that shit figured out man kidz r awsome best things in life man r tha times with yer kid man charish that shit dogg deep song man really felt u man

yo shut the fuck up black u the fuckin ass homo u probably aint even black i aint neither but atleast i dont claim ta be

thanx for da feed yall...and fucka damn black

oh yeah...my son got out tha hospital this mornin...he tight now...baby momz still bitchin...but yeah, its tight...he wit his grandma...somebody wanna nominate dis for OM of da month?...*smiles*

uppin..........

yo really i felt it feel sorry for your son man hope he's doing better man my greatist hopes for him for real and i'll give urs a 8/10 really deep shit keep it up

thanx....uppin
-doe bagz