last time uppin dis...damn

-DB

that was good dawg... told a really good story... u got skillz in poetry dawg fa real..... damn man... shit was tight... never heard of u but imma have to give u a 9/10

yeah, agreeing totallly with (lovely) dq here, the emotion was powerfull man, imagery was bouncing all over the place when i was reading, haha, yeah, but, i could feel it man, you did a real good job of having ^ balance in your vocab, cause alot of time, some people can over-vocab (how i feel anyways), or not use enough vocab, but you had a nice equilibrium in there, so that was good, it flowed nicely too, this was a great piece, keep up man....

thanx yall...mos def

-DB