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^ Lol..
Thanks yo.. Uppin for some madness.. |
The ratio of upping to voting is quite unbalanced...
...lets get this party started ya'll. Fucking vote. Upped. |
This is getting be to supremely gay.
Uppin for votes. |
Votes - 1
Spektikul/Mimesis Uppings - 11 UPPING #12!!!!!!!!!! Fuck...you'd be crazy not to vote on this shit.... |
This is our 13th up...
still with 1 vote...wtf... |
Numero cuatorce up.
Wordness. Vote up.. UHH. |
This was feedback posted for Spektikul
spek had better punches mime had better rhyme
punches > rhymes |
uppin #15 yall...
whut whut!? Vote bitches!!!! |
Uppin #16......
Gay........ |
Upping #17..........................................
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Upping # 18.
WORDNESS. Vote up like voters.. |
Upping #19............................
Its funny cause you and I have both voted for ppl and asked to return the favor.... |
Yeah.
Everybody is being gay. At least my post count can go up.. |
Voted For: Mimesis
Your fifteen years old, finally growing some hair on your body Reason your "still devilish", because your that far from "godly" ^^^this hot line of spek's vs.... You suck at text.. Ill ignite you, but bitch,ur just a dyke dude Your only One Of A Kind.. cause nobody wants to be like you Im rippin you mayne.. Seriously.. im homing in to missle ur shit Cause im known to spit official art.. you just have artificial spits .....these two. of mim's mim also had more wordplay How about u roast.. turned to hoe.. i got you burnin that slow But, Spek was aledgely good.. and the world turned into a plateau ..... which i like more than metaphors of spek VV You dream of BJ's and cream your PJ's, your dreams about to shatter Your about as useful as a guy in a wheelchair...owning a ladder and...... Your as shitty as your city, your name makes me think man-he-sucks You got no respect, just like Phoenix has got no Stan-ley-cups ...wordplay punches are much better than metaphors, u gotta have a helerious one or somin just off the chain for it to match up wit wordplay. `` som im goin wit- mim cuz more wordplay and havin two quotables to one from speck, eventhough spek that line of yours was the hottest of the battle, but u didn't have enough lines like that to win. nice battle from both besides gay metaphors. return the vote, i'll post the link in a sec. |
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...997497&posted=1
ya return wit some useful votes, both verses need some critism |
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