no crew votes dick.

and J got it anyway :gfy:

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Voted For: J DOT

your kidding me right? hahah wow haha i think you coulda jus dropped a bar and beat his whole rhyme hah well or what ever you call it. he had.... you def took this one st8 up easy .... you owned him in every aspect... metas ..punches...i don't even need to explain this shit you owned him haha i'm still laugh'n


black ....put down the pen and get hooked on phonics

vote//j dot

Voted For: J DOT

im bout to murk u, case in point
rip open ya skin to find nothin, my anger is at a point
...YOU RHYMED THE WORD TWICE, KINDA WEAK
sorry waste of ya daddy sperm stop livin
im bout to kill u for even thinkin im gone punk out till dis evenin....THIS DIDNT EVEN RHYME, NO PUNCH
fuckin sissy, u nothin, i told u
take tha dick out ya ass cuz its crunch time, u totaled
THE PROBLEM WITH YA VERSE IS U TALK ABOUT WHAT YOU GONNA DO, NO PUNCHES , NO PERSONAL, NO-NO

Look kid, ur not a factor, ur beatin urself
Callout jdot if u will, and come up shorter than elfs
I’ll tighten my belt, b4 ur ghostwriter beat me
DECENT 1ST 2 LINES, AT LEAST A PERSONAL IN THERE
Ur steps beyond garbage, time to digest what i eat
beef is nuthin. roam tha NOK thread if u want
only thing big about BLACK, consist with his font
THIS VERSE IS NOT THE BEST JDOTS DONE, NEEDED HARDER PUNCHES AND SOME WORDS DIDT HIT, BUT BECAUSE HE AT LEAST ATTEMPTED TO ATTACK HIS FOE, UNLIKE BLACK..
I GOTTA GIVE HIM THE WIN..
return the favor please
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uppin this shit...


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who is black? cuz he seriously can't rap for anything haha

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Voted For: J DOT

JDOT won he murdaed this kid...
J had the best punches the hit hard and direct metas were ight flow was good structre was a lil off at times but it was still good
best line-beef is nuthin. roam tha NOK thread if u want
only thing big about BLACK, consist with his font

return the vote in my battle in my sig please

uppin this....ima hit that battle up in a few.....

Voted For: J DOT

i thiink jdot took this one hands down. he came harder wit punches and shit. altho it wasnt tha best verse i seen from jdot, i still think he took black in every category. black, yo structure was wayy off, and ur punches didnt even land. yo personals were stupid. i noticed some attempts at personals. just stop battlin, i dont think u got skillz at all, if this was one of ur best verse. good drop jdot, this was a lil too easy for you.

and return that damn vote ni99a...~1~

Voted For: J DOT

ok, lets see, J DOT owned this because black needs to work on everything....flow was horrible, structure non-existant, your attempts at punches were weak, "im as real as it gets"...no one cares, period....gotta up everythin man, elevate alot..

JDOT, looks like you wrote it in 2 min, aha, but thats all you needed, didnt really need to come hard, but you still killed him, word to you, hahha

v/JDOT....visible punches/personals....came harder, better flow/structure...everything, he took the whole cake