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Voted For: Kesse
BLACK im bout to do u in, like da mob did dat bitch named roy killa? u jus santanin, u a dancin boy no im bout to spit in ya face for any remark u might say boy i now u gone drop weak bars like u always do, youngin go play wit ya toys okay pretty decent i will shot u, not in a net way but lethal my injection will leave u limpin like i seen u nah, extend ur flow here u half way crook, i know dat u shook up from dis rock so i cross over to tha next nigga dat dare to test tha prince of hip-hop decent, here punch could’ve been harder [font=brushscrd]Kesse[/font your just a typical newb, trashing around like you be owning this site like it says in your name...in this battle theres no chance you'll see light good punch thank god for you though... you taught us bad equals sexy, real swell but if what your saying is true, then your verse will be hot as hell uhh, kinda good here, punch was okay "license to kill", please, look at your record, nothing, no progress for someone with that little posts....the shit coming out is at an excess decent if whackness was a plague, then man, you were severely stricken and your rhymes are like a poor mans cupboards....merely slim pickens nope, not feelin this one though what makes the perfect song, shit buddy, you wouldn't have a clue but i'll tell what makes the worst verse....DUH!! anything by you good persona & punch here Overall Kesse took this one Punches were harder Nice vocab, the flow was good & the structure was pretty decent but overall Kesse took this one RTF on my battle with Buck.Shot, Kesse |
word, i will RTF, sometime, so, yeah, upppin......
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Voted For: Kesse
im bout to do u in, like da mob did dat bitch named roy killa? u jus santanin, u a dancin boy .........pretty damn bad opener im bout to spit in ya face for any remark u might say boy i now u gone drop weak bars like u always do, youngin go play wit ya toys .....the content is way too basic, raise ya vocab up i will shot u, not in a net way but lethal my injection will leave u limpin like i seen u u half way crook, i know dat u shook up from dis rock so i cross over to tha next nigga dat dare to test tha prince of hip-hop .....no hate intended but you'll need alot of elevation to be taken serious . . . . im not going to break down keese verse cuz its obvious he won this, in my opinion wasted good lines, but he won http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177392 return the favor please |
word, thanks fo feed.....^battle closed....upppin...;l
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Voted For: Kesse
Kesse structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. you attempted some wordplay.. the line about his name was pretty good.. you connected a few punches.. but yo, you should stop using links.. they are turning played.. that took away from the two punchlines you used them in.. other then that.. that was a good name flip for a personal.. BLACK structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. no good wordplay.. at all.. none of your punches connected.. either you were just making statements or dropping complete ass.. either way, nothing of yours hit.. no good personals.. Overall both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. Kesse had better wordplay, more connecting punches and a better personal.. so basing off of that.. Kesse wins in a landslide.. VOTE - KESSE Please hit up the link in my sig.. |
This was feedback posted for BLACK
Wow Ya Verse Wass Horrible Lmao @ You Thinkin You Won...........
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Voted For: Kesse
BLACK~your verse seemed rather simple, the vocab, and the flow of it, nothing really stood out here, no hate, but you need some elevation with multies and wordplay...and i dont think "santanin" is a word, although, i know what you were trying to say, but good attempt, just need more practice..1 KESSE~pretty decent opener, nice wordplay and link usage, although unneccessary, because you already are using multies and strong vocab in this verse, nice personals on him, i like the "cupboards..merely slim pickens "bar..i got a chuckle,aha, funny closer, i think you toook this battle easily...good job, keep it up.1 |
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