uhh, this piece was pretty decent, nuttin much of here though
was pretty damn long, but it was aight though.......keep @ it

6/10

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sick drop dude non stop multi's and shit pretty consistant structure flow was sick.....started to get shaky in like a few lines but it wasnt too noticeable good vocab and i just thought this was a good piece you always drop that fire....but you wouldnt be where your at without me and i wouldnt be where im at without you....someday man....we will collide in each catagory.....text, poetry, topical, freestyle, and adio if i ever get a mic peace and be :cool:

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Clean peice of work had me falling out of my chair lol, Structure was on point you had your peice flowing back to back. Nice word play and multis. OUTSTANDING! :thumbup:

wordness... uppin this old shit

damn man...you gotta stop killin shit...I need niggas left breathing for my shit lol shit was onpar with anything you write...nuttin ore to say...9/10

wordness... thanks homie...

uppin this shit for my brother from another mother One Step...well not brother but maybe 3rd cousin lol

not feelin how you bit eminem, LOL but good i guess, didnt read it i stopped wehn i read the eminem line sorry but you bit, LOL
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its cuz its a remix of the song man......lol.....he didnt bite just redid the song HIS way :thumbup:

actuallly, i wasn't remixing anything... and i didn't bite shit.. and yes i know he said it in one of his songs but i was saying it because it ryhmed you dick head.. so fuck what you thought