This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

uppin..................
Tight battle, dont sleep.

O word...i thought you was going to vote mane!


oh well......uppin

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Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

iight...its like dis for me...

slobk best bar:
"So Listen "Mista"..Am I Suppose To Get Aroused..Cuz Ur Rec Is Outta The Clouds?
Na..U Dont Even Deserve Bows..Cuz "The Jury" Is Always Part Of A Crowd..lol"
^^^dis was a nice one...could have left tha lol out though...i think people get it...no hate but yeah

mista best bar:
"My punches put you in a choke hold make you see blue
I'll leave you bloody and eat you like sloppy joe's for food"
^^^it was iight but wasnt matchin his kid

good battle but its really like dis...i guess

structure: slobk
vocab: tie...lmao
punches: slobk

my vote=slobk
yall both stay up...~1~

hope i voted right...w/e...but if its any otha questions...PM me...iight
-Doe Bagz

This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

dis waz a good battle fo real $lobk came hard on his verse as well as my noi mista dis gon be a good battle ima nominate it n Rv award

^^^Coo..Thanks On That...Uppin..............................

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

i'ma vote for ::..:$lobK::..: your punches jus kept comin homie... i liked the first rhyme the best, nice multi...mista yours was pretty good too but "man" and "name" doesn't rhyme...both of u had nice flow...but ::..:$lobK::..: 's punches and multi put him over the top for me

return the favor...link in my sig homies

Aiight coo, coo.....uppin.................................

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

this goes to $lobk because of personals...MA...ur punches were aight...but they werent personals or as clever as $lobk...$lobk str8 murdered tha jury in this verse...and that personal about tha pics was fiya...

MA...try usin more personals...

punches: $lobk
personals: $lobk
metas: $lobk
wordplay: $lobk
flow: $lobk
structure: both

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

Not a bad battle, Black Quen was sayin it was hot, so i thought i'd check up on it an dropp my vote

Slob, nice shit, real nice personals, maybe strecthed your lines a little bit, an could of removed some undeeded words, but other then that, ya came real strong, are you an alias?

Mistah, dope shit, only problem is where he was strecthing lines, in maybe 1 or 2 of your lines, they wernt strecthed enuff, an centering your verse like that looks wrong unless you can make it look like a box, ya feel me? i learnt the hardway too, had some creative stuff tho'...closer ws prety dope an almost got you the win, but Slob was more consistant throughout so he gets my vote

RTF